Fig Tree, New Year's Day

Our fig in January, entirely denuded now
like my heart in your absence, is but
more beautiful, if possible, in its seasonal
solemnity than in summer's exacting extravagance.
The trunk, grown massive in manhood, is a citadel
of strength supporting the curving bowl of its
branches as they bend back into themselves, becoming
the bare black sculpture of winter trees Hemingway
described in Paris in the Jardin of Luxembourg
where we used to walk, following in his footsteps.

These prayerful branches, grown as large as
the beanstalk giant of storybook lore, cup
the sky, making a sieve through which rain filters,
better for unobstructed passage to its 
earthbound blessing, clearer for the distillation.

Above ground two massive roots, more visible
in winter definition--veins from the beating heart
of the tree--though siblings still, sprawl out 
in different directions, then disappear wherever
they are traveling,  who knows where?  Not
climbing skyward like Jack on his leafy ladder, 
but earthward out of sight toward a Southern
provenance, toward Provence, perhaps, 
as if impassioned for home.
       

      HAPPY NEW YEAR FELLOW SOUPERS!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/27/2010 10:27:00 AM
This is a very impressive poem. I read a more recent poem of yours and though I liked the sound of it , it was a bit over my head. This one here is the type of poetry I love to find here at the Soup: descriptive and giving a clear glimpse of who you are in the choosing of such a theme. LUv, Andrea ps A fav for THIS beauty.
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Date: 2/14/2010 8:56:00 AM
Hi, Nola. I'm slowly reading your wonderful book of poetry. Lots of nostalgia. Oh how I love nostalgia! SENDING BIG VALENTINE'S DAY HUG. daver
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Date: 1/3/2010 9:43:00 AM
Yes! Strange how we remember trees, or a particular tree. This one brings a shiver of lost days. I know your story. I'm thinking - right this minute - of a big, shedding, cottonwood from my childhood. Love, daver
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Date: 1/2/2010 2:11:00 PM
Thank you for sharing this poem with us Nola. Happy New Year to you also. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/1/2010 5:50:00 PM
Nola~Wow great descriptive piece Happy New Year To you! Great Write! Laura :)
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