Fig Leaf From Eve, Fall Collection

She wore next to naught, bare birthday suit,
Yet, sense of fashion was absolute.
Lifting that sole fig leaf—
The briefest of a brief,
Said: from Fall-collection— ah how cute!
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Tongue-in-cheek | 24.01.2020 |
Topic: fashion, humour

Poet’s Note: I remember to have seen a cartoon some time back. Adam and eve are shown in the Garden of Eden amidst heaps of fallen leaves. Eve picks up one meant to be her fig leaf, and says, ‘see, this is from my Fall Collection’. 

Almost wordless, a cartoon brings the point home very effectively. A poem too does that so laconically. What when the two combine?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Michael Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 6:47 AM
Striking imagery...well said too.
Pathak Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 7:41 AM
grateful for your kind feedback, sorry, I'm so tardy in responding
Gondolf Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 6:43 AM
Love this limerick, Aniruddha, nicely done! John
Pathak Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 7:44 AM
And to you also, dear poet, thanks for the feedback, I should have responded earlier
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