Fig Leaf

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What does autumn sunshine gloriously reveal? When the sun sets too swiftly in the west keel When a breeze said, "Sweetheart, I admire you." Now moan the dying chords of the gloomy view? The cold that begets each blurred leaf moans, It clangs inside the veins and blisters the bones. I loathe the mellowed tones of the clock thrum, The hallway of time strikes a brilliant hoodlum. I'm ridden that the fig's fallen leaves can't be undone, I queried, yet has been unfit to mend the core bone. Those dreary addenda appear to float on the vein, And reflect my adamant dismay to me within. He was fraught before dying startlingly, A load of the burden of debt is crushing loosely. Then, he learned a lot from this position, Judge people who have plaid in fiscal coercion. Hide behind the fig leaf, in the shadow, Hide behind it your heart's calm to follow. Never trust that fig leaf; it has a bark Snack and taste from my oozy limp mark. It's the fabled stint to delve into the spurts of life, Lacking a fig leaf, you might swap bare in strife. None left after the last leaf fell on the ground, Also, each one saw it clearly, but no sound.
Written: March 28, 2022 1ST Place Contest Winner This or That, Vol 11 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 4/24/2022 1:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win
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Date: 4/22/2022 8:40:00 PM
I got plunged in the unfathomable depths of this poem, dear friend ! Once again I read it in its complexities. Congratulations on your great win !
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Date: 4/22/2022 8:20:00 PM
Great work. "It's the fabled stint to delve into the spurts of life" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/22/2022 11:23:00 AM
The cold that begets each blurred leaf moans, It clangs inside the veins and blisters the bones. Congratulations on top win!
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Date: 4/22/2022 11:06:00 AM
BIG congrats on your first place win, Lasaad. Excellent write.
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Date: 4/22/2022 10:26:00 AM
Wonderful use of metaphor and very creative imagery Lasaad. I look forward to delving more deeply into the depths of this poem. Congratulations on your win! Easter season blessings!
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Date: 4/22/2022 7:50:00 AM
As usual, an excellent poem from you, Lasaad:-) Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 4/22/2022 8:16:00 AM
Thank you very much for your help, Edward. Thank you for taking the time to read, comment, and place my poem. Thank you for helping to make this place even better with your encouragement and unwavering support via your wonderful contests.
Date: 3/29/2022 12:09:00 PM
A philosophical poem that provokes the mind. Excellently written, my friend, Lasaad! A fav. Be blessed!
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Date: 3/29/2022 2:33:00 AM
Great poem. So much imagery. Best for a win.
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Date: 3/28/2022 10:32:00 PM
This is amazingly beautiful and meaningful ! How long can we cover our nakedness under a fig leaf.... ! It will also fall down one day ! All the best in the contest dear friend !
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Date: 3/28/2022 7:25:00 PM
Lasaad, I really loved the flow of your poem. I sense the fig leaf is a fine metaphor...for something. I'm having a lot of trouble figuring out what to write for this contest. I wish you the best of luck!
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