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Fig Leaf

Flimsy fig leaf camouflage,
subterfuge reveals montage,
mind games at play everyday,
as conscience to rest we lay.

Enacting oneupmanship,
demons of mind we worship,
anchored in hypnotic trance,
enticed by dark desire’s dance.

Engaging in acts feral,
we find our soul’s in peril,
yet we wear the fig leaf mask,
making weary earth life task.

Naked one day before God,
our lower mind’s overawed,
for the web of deceit spun,
needs by us, to be undone.

By our hand, committed theft, 
we find ourselves love bereft,
thus reincarnate again,
to erase our soul’s dark stain.

Harking to the divine call, 
seeds of love sown, we stand tall,
same inside out, transparent,
vibrant in the bliss current.

28-March-2022

HMS

This or That, Vol 11 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kauffman Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 10:16 AM
Truly blissful Seeker. "Acts feral," "anchored in hypnotic trance," "flimsy fig leaf camouflauge" - so many dynamic, vibrant images that carry your message of hope - from Eden to exile, from exile to Resurrection - "vibrant in bliss!" Congratulations. This is wonderful. Blessings to you!
Seeker Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 10:26 PM
Thank you, Sam
Miller Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 1:42 AM
Congratulations!
Seeker Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 3:56 AM
Thank you,Terry, hope you are doing well
Alex Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 8:38 PM
Beautifully linked to the Genesis. Congratulations!
Seeker Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 3:31 AM
Thanks Chris
Ibeh Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 1:24 PM
What a marvelous poem, Seeker! You never fail to amaze. I'll revisit the Jueju form after reading this great poem. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
Seeker Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 3:31 AM
Thanks for hosting Edward and for the recognition
Baker Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 8:45 AM
brilliant construction in this hopeful poem my friend. You showed the problem, the harm, the healing and the new life. Eloquently composed and written. A poet friend and his soulmate Sara, Bill
Seeker Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 9:24 AM
Thanks Bill (and Sara), I guess it turned out quite well, I’m pleased with it myself too! Thanks for the encouragement
George Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 9:36 PM
A lovely entry.... assured of a first place win.... ! That's what I hope, Seeker friend !
Seeker Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 9:53 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 7:23 AM
A beautiful poem with much to ponder on. I was away unfortunately with eye trouble.
Seeker Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 9:22 AM
Hope you get better soon, Victor
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