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Fifty Fifty

touching someone that is the key touching someone is the key to me to lean on my shoulder as you did yesterday yes, i am sure that this is the way for me to reach for your hand and you to grasp mine to me that is to have a little more of you it is more than your hand but part of your soul i hold it as if it were pure gold the story that is told is poetry in motion as lovers unfold and enclose their notions anytime anywhere you know i'll be there kind of devotion each one knowing what the other would do run to me as i run to you be with me as i am with you reach for me as i reach back nothing on this earth can ever beat that

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/21/2013 12:44:00 PM
You have a natural talent for rhyme and I encourage you to write more of it. Thus far, I have enjoyed everything of yours I've read. Another great poem; kudos!
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Date: 6/8/2012 11:09:00 AM
That is what i call an awesome fifty fifty in a give and take relationship. awesome poem. love phyl
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Date: 5/30/2012 3:33:00 PM
It just gets better if that is possible! What sweet words to tuck away in the heart; to be read many times especially on a rainy day. Love, Lizzie
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Date: 5/29/2012 6:58:00 AM
Lovely and sweet poem John, well done. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/28/2012 4:54:00 AM
Wow really nice John.....feeling it alot! well done
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Date: 5/27/2012 11:36:00 PM
ah yes complete and ever sweet, the lovers game of purest passion, the world can fall into disrepair, delete, as long as i get my ration, great poetry mate....
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Date: 5/27/2012 9:56:00 PM
Sweet write John. I have just sent you soup mail.
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Date: 5/27/2012 9:09:00 PM
ooooing and ahhhhhing at the sweetness and declarations in this poem...enjoyed !!
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Date: 5/27/2012 7:34:00 PM
hope it all works out, john, if it's what you really want!!
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Date: 5/27/2012 7:32:00 PM
"Ohhh, I love it. So sweet!! What a darling!! You are a doll, John! Love, Toquyen"
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Date: 5/27/2012 6:58:00 PM
quite nice indeed,,,,have a fantastical day ;}
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Date: 5/27/2012 5:01:00 PM
lovely john!
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