Fiery Skyscrapers

FIERY    SKYSCRAPERS


City is dull as a fired gun
When the sun goes down
Lights not yet  lit, buildings dun :
Sunset’s last gleaming on the town.

Reflection from  buildings follows
The lowering  flaming sun.  Glaring,
He makes gilded castles, mirrors windows
With orange-yellow fiery flaring.

Armor-plated against the forces of darkness
These Gideon-polished glass shields  *
Inflict  sun-reflect on  an enemy helpless.
A golden weapon he wields.

Standing proud above they seem
Fearless of  the  dark, signaling to me  -
As the Shining Towers of Illium gleamed *
When Helen first spied  them from the sea.
…………………………………………………………………………………….

NOTES

At sunset the windows of many skyscrapers are dazzling in the reflected sunlight, often turning the entire building to shimmering gold.

*   Illium = Troy. Helen was the woman ultimately responsible for the destruction of Troy.

*   Gideon  was a famous leader of the Israelites  in  Biblical times, winning a battle by polishing his soldiers’ shields and blinding his foes with reflected sunlight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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