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Fierce Mooning

Trotting along;fighting death – with delaying techniques. Chemo had failed. Weeping Ashoka, how do I name you differently ? I may not see you again. I am hurt, very badly. Absolutely rooted, firmly in autumn. My leaves were falling. Pushing back the interface between smiles and tears; the trespasser goes to moon. It was traditional, garlanding the poet- who had killed his muse. Satish Verma

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Date: 5/6/2013 7:16:00 AM
Not exactly sure how to interpert this one..If it is really a bout with cancer, I am truly sorry to hear of the illness effecting you or your love one..I hope that the treatment is working..I will remember you and your family in my prayers..If it is a metaphor for your muse, great creativity that you have displayed in this work..I have not seen your name in awhile on here but of course, I could have just missed you when you come on and I am not on..Sara
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Date: 5/3/2013 6:31:00 AM
Cancer ...... chemotherapy ..... so hopeless! - Terrible sad, Satish. - Well written. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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