Fields of Garlic- Roman Legion Contest

The 10 th legion of the Roman Empire
Wondered why no matter what
The other side knew they were somewhere
Took them forever to figure out that

They marched in silence, along the way
nothing clinked  not a word spoken
Yet the men in armour were waiting there
What magic was their token

Wasn't magic you idiots of roman hue
Can't you guess why all know where your at
It's all the garlic you like to chew
They can smell you miles away in fact.

You plant fields of garlic to eat by all
Medication in its infancy
Great for healing the wounds you have
You'd have less if you listen to me

Stop chewing garlic all day long
Your breath would then surely smell fresh
Carry on the way you are
The 10th legion will get less and less



Roman soldiers ate garlic to inspire them and give them courage. Because that's what the Roman generals believed  they planted fields of garlic in the countries they conquered, believing that courage was transferred to the battlefield. 


Penned 01/06/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/18/2014 3:55:00 PM
:)..PD
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Date: 7/4/2014 7:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 7/2/2014 1:58:00 AM
The Romans were brilliant in every way! Your poem is very insightful Seren. Damn the Romans were smart. J.A.B.
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Date: 7/1/2014 6:54:00 AM
Ha! A history lesson, I did not know, but it would make a sneak attack difficult! Congrats on a great win, Seren. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/30/2014 10:30:00 PM
sweet win...PD
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/1/2014 1:22:00 AM
Thanks Linda ....Seren
Date: 6/4/2014 7:48:00 AM
lovely poem, you are verry good at all the diffrent writing teqnuiqes
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/4/2014 7:59:00 AM
lol it was a fun write Diane ....Seren
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