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bright gold bitter weeds mimic summer's sun 'pon field.... horses now kid's glue

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 9/16/2019 5:30:00 AM

bitter weed but in bright gold!!

Jack Horne

Date: 8/26/2019 2:19:00 PM

sad but clever haiku, my friend

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/27/2019 5:36:00 AM

Jack, We passed by this small patch that there had been three horses in the past but the patch was way to small to support three horses not enough room for them to get exercise, graze, etc. Now the patch had no horses and only was growing bitter weeds. Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/18/2019 7:35:00 PM

Good haiku, Sara! Was not expecting that ending. Blessings, Kim

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/20/2019 5:34:00 AM

Kim, I guess a surprise ending is a good thing for a Haiku. Thanks for the visit.. Sara

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/18/2019 11:43:00 AM

Free and safe...in gold bitter weeds...imaginative one...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/20/2019 5:33:00 AM

Michael, Thanks for stopping by. I saw this patch where people had horses in the past and it was now a field of bitter weeds. The field really was not large enough for the horses that they had there. I wondered if they had sold the horses, moved them to some pasture somewhere or if the horses had died or been sold to the glue factory. Sara