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Fiddler On the Roof

There once was an odd fiddler on the roof Townsfolk thought of him as the village goof He was a nuisance and pain But for finding him insane The onus was theirs for burden of proof Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved

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James Foulk

Date: 7/1/2011 11:08:00 AM

a fine creative Limerick, enjoyed reading. thank you for commenting on The Silence of a Falling Star.

James Fraser

Date: 6/23/2011 11:42:00 AM

Fine Limerick Robert, love it - enjoyable piece :)

Wandering Butterfly

Date: 6/21/2011 7:09:00 AM

Keen and Ingenious work with this one Bob, great work, thanks for your kind word on my poem "Majesty" , Your comments always stand out. Love, Randa HOPE YOU HAD A WONDERFUL FATHERS DAY!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/19/2011 11:12:00 AM

LOL "If he were a rich man," they would have justed viewed him as eccentric. Wealth determines who is considered insane in some cases. Very witty, Bob! Love and Happy Fathers Day, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2011 9:17:00 AM

Happy Fathers day Bob H., here enjoying your limerick... had fun reading... enjoy your day,...p.d.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/19/2011 9:01:00 AM

robert, i need an antacid... funny and witty; a master of comedy! :) huggs, nette

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/19/2011 7:30:00 AM

First class limerick, Bob. Excellent. Enjoyed. Happy Fathers Day, my friend. Best to you and your family. Una/Ralphie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/19/2011 5:59:00 AM

Inspiration has filled the pages of poetry over this weekend here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to have been able to read your poetry here today Bob. Have a wonderful Sunday I will be back soon to read more. Love, Carol