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Fiddler On the Hoof

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In Solitude I Wander The countryside I roam Like a fox without a den I don’t possess a home. A minstrel on a fiddle Plucking strings, come rain or snow With furry friends a-following To hear this one man show. Little birds cheep out in tune Their tweeting symphony As all of nature comes alive In joyful harmony. The trees bow down their branches As this chorus walks on by They rustle leaves in honour Raising spirits to the sky. 12th October 2020 Completely your choice (25) any form any theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand *

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Vijay Galia

Date: 10/21/2020 7:22:00 AM

Congratulations. You write beautifully and flawlessly..

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/21/2020 7:44:00 AM

Thank you Vijay, I appreciated that very much. Belle

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/19/2020 7:55:00 AM

This flows so well, Belle! 'A Yid'l mit a fid'l!' Love it. A FAVE for me, for sure. Danke Schoen, Gershon

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/19/2020 4:25:00 PM

‘A yiddle with a fiddle!’ - and thank you very much. Belle

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/15/2020 8:44:00 PM

A big wow! Congrats!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/17/2020 11:14:00 AM

Unseeking Seeker, thank very much indeed. Belle

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2020 6:24:00 PM

what a cute play on words in that title and I see this is a winner. BIG congrats! (love your name)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/17/2020 11:13:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, most kind. Belle

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/15/2020 9:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. "Magical" Enjoy your win.......

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/15/2020 9:33:00 AM

Thank you very much Paula, it’s so good to have had a win with this poem and most unexpected. Belle

John Watt

Date: 10/14/2020 11:23:00 AM

I loved your charming tale of the minstrel in the woods and his band of musical beasts! Well done, and congrats on your #1 with Brian this week ~ John

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/14/2020 5:05:00 PM

Thank you John, glad you enjoyed the read. Belle

Gary Radice

Date: 10/14/2020 12:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! I'm looking at your name and wondering if you are from Manchester England and pine for a once great (but now sadly defunct) Amusement Park (Belle Vue) that had one of the greatest roller coasters the UK ever had. :) Cheers - Gary

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/14/2020 2:12:00 AM

Thank you Gary, it’s sad when amusement parks close for whatever reason, I’m not from Manchester, further south in the Midlands, England. Pity about the closing of Belle Vue, to think of riding a roller coaster now is scary to me, but I loved them in my youth. Cheers to you too, Belle

Joanna Feltham

Date: 10/13/2020 11:54:00 PM

I really enjoyed your poem, congratulations on your win. :-) x

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/14/2020 1:50:00 AM

Many thanks Joanna, the win was a lovely surprise. Belle

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/13/2020 5:31:00 PM

Belle, this is delightful! CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2020 5:58:00 PM

Thank you so much Janice. Belle

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/13/2020 1:54:00 PM

This is beautifully written and well deserving of the win. Congratulations Belle! Linda

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2020 4:09:00 PM

Thank you Linda, most grateful. Belle

Silent One

Date: 10/13/2020 7:36:00 AM

The trees bow down their branches As this chorus walks on by They rustle leaves in honour Raising spirits to the sky... Lovely last stanza, love that imagery.... Another great poem.. I think formatting adds to a poem and you do that well..

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2020 4:06:00 PM

Thank you Silent One, appreciated. Belle

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/13/2020 5:34:00 AM

This one is cute and warm. Nicely done, Belle!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2020 4:05:00 PM

Thank you very much Kim. Belle