Carolyn Devonshire Poet Alliteration

Fickle Freddie

Freedom fighter Fickle Freddie's
forced to freefall on foe's field.
Freddie flirts with foe's fetching filly.
Fickle fighter falls to "friendly fire."


*Entry for Gwendolen’s Big Kid Tongue Twister”contest

(My friends think I'm crazy, but, yes, they did have some problems with all the "f" words.  LOL)

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Kabuteng P.Ink K. October 6, 2011 at 4:21 PM Enjoyed reading this aloud Carolyn :) Wish you the best in Gwendolen's contest :) these tongue twisters sound like fun ;) and thanks, I re-formatted it to fit the max line limit :Dhugs

Daver Austin October 3, 2011 at 11:11 AM No trouble - not a real "F" word in the bunch. Luck in the contest. Love, daver

Barbara Gorelick October 2, 2011 at 6:07 PM Awesome alliteration ..way to go m LNC...BG

Prince Ekpemandu October 2, 2011 at 4:30 PM nice one

Nancy Jones October 2, 2011 at 3:21 PM lol... that's what I call survival skills!

Jack Horne October 2, 2011 at 3:14 PM LOL, I sure had some problems trying to read that one aloud too. Great fun

Tony Lane October 2, 2011 at 3:12 PM Fantastic.

Russell Sivey October 2, 2011 at 2:31 PM Very good tongue twister Carolyn! I'm no good at tongue twisters and I had a harder time with this one, great work!!

Wilma Neels October 2, 2011 at 2:25 PM This is such a cute entry Carolyn, really enjoyed it!! thank you for the bday wishes for Sukayna and your kind comment, love you Wilma

Kash Poet October 2, 2011 at 1:48 PM Very good tongue twister here Carolyn!Enjoyed.