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Fickle Freddie

Freedom fighter Fickle Freddie's forced to freefall on foe's field. Freddie flirts with foe's fetching filly. Fickle fighter falls to "friendly fire." *Entry for Gwendolen’s Big Kid Tongue Twister”contest (My friends think I'm crazy, but, yes, they did have some problems with all the "f" words. LOL)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/6/2011 4:21:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this aloud Carolyn :) Wish you the best in Gwendolen's contest :) these tongue twisters sound like fun ;) and thanks, I re-formatted it to fit the max line limit :Dhugs
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Date: 10/3/2011 11:11:00 AM
No trouble - not a real "F" word in the bunch. Luck in the contest. Love, daver
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Date: 10/2/2011 6:07:00 PM
Awesome alliteration ..way to go m LNC...BG
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Date: 10/2/2011 4:30:00 PM
nice one
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Date: 10/2/2011 3:21:00 PM
lol... that's what I call survival skills!
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Date: 10/2/2011 3:14:00 PM
LOL, I sure had some problems trying to read that one aloud too. Great fun
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Date: 10/2/2011 3:12:00 PM
Fantastic.
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Date: 10/2/2011 2:31:00 PM
Very good tongue twister Carolyn! I'm no good at tongue twisters and I had a harder time with this one, great work!!
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Date: 10/2/2011 2:25:00 PM
This is such a cute entry Carolyn, really enjoyed it!! thank you for the bday wishes for Sukayna and your kind comment, love you Wilma
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Date: 10/2/2011 1:48:00 PM
Very good tongue twister here Carolyn!Enjoyed.
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