Fiasco

In front of the shining mirror
I stood with my hair limp
A Cinderella for a party
Looked like a drowned chimp
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 10:29 PM
hehehehe. VEry cute!
Anderson Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 7:15 PM
Very funny. Good luck in the contest...Jimmy
La France Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 12:45 PM
This is the best I read yet, I am laughing, cause, I sort of know that feeling~~
Roberts Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 10:23 AM
THIS is why I own a dozen hats! good entry for the contest, best of luck
Devonshire Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 9:27 AM
Tahera, I get that same feeling each time I look in the mirror. How is it some people were blessed with such thick, lustrous, bouncy hair and others have to take pains not to make their own appear "limp." Great entry for the contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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January 11, 2011 at 4:38 AM
Smile - The title suits this very well :)
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