Fiasco

In front of the shining mirror I stood with my hair limp A Cinderella for a party Looked like a drowned chimp

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2011 10:29:00 PM

hehehehe. VEry cute!

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 1/11/2011 7:15:00 PM

Very funny. Good luck in the contest...Jimmy

Constance La France

Date: 1/11/2011 12:45:00 PM

This is the best I read yet, I am laughing, cause, I sort of know that feeling~~

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/11/2011 10:23:00 AM

THIS is why I own a dozen hats! good entry for the contest, best of luck

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/11/2011 9:27:00 AM

Tahera, I get that same feeling each time I look in the mirror. How is it some people were blessed with such thick, lustrous, bouncy hair and others have to take pains not to make their own appear "limp." Great entry for the contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/11/2011 4:38:00 AM

Smile - The title suits this very well :)