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few treasured sunrays awaken dormant daydreams ~ hope lurks on standby AP: 1st place 2021 Posted on May 1, 2021 ~ excerpt form my STANBY - HAIKU SEQUENCE originally posted on December 28, 2019

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 5/5/2021 7:49:00 PM

FAB! Miss Line

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2021 10:06:00 AM

Thanks, Timothy ~ much appreciated

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2021 1:19:00 PM

I see you placed high. Well deserved, Line. GREAT KU

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/5/2021 3:40:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated ~

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/4/2021 8:52:00 AM

Beautifully done; congrats on the placement.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/4/2021 8:47:00 PM

thank you, Caren ~

Peter Rees

Date: 5/4/2021 1:05:00 AM

I’m not always a haiku fan, but these few words say so much, I really enjoy your poem, especially the brilliant “hope lurks on standby”.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/4/2021 7:19:00 AM

Indeed, too many 3-line poems try to pass as haiku ~ I've been guilty of it myself.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 5/2/2021 4:50:00 PM

Aw that's beautiful... Great write

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/3/2021 7:33:00 AM

Thank you very much, Paghunda ~

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 5/2/2021 6:40:00 AM

Treasures sunrise awakening dormant daydreams... Amazing Line... God bless... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/2/2021 8:49:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Anitha ~

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/1/2021 1:26:00 PM

Hey, this is a good one that I can understand, Line. nicely penned:)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/1/2021 8:25:00 PM

Thanks, Daniel ~ lol