Fetching Life

I lie in my back, mouth open wide,
 hoping to breathe out my feelings
I seem to be taking more in, hence no change occurs.
All my days I wake hoping to have different feelings,
But this heart is always heavy, it’s under Thor’s hammer
I can’t free myself from the burns inside, the negativity 
Roots are too thick, can’t plunge them out.
No matter how long I breathe there’s no reaction,
Except looking like a fool.
My only wish is to take it out , destroy it ,then create a clean one
A heart that has never beared pain, that knows no sorrow.
Fools hope I know, because as long as I live I will have to experience
the brutality of life. What then? I can’t stop being human, can I ?
The tragedies are what maketh the man.
But I won’t stop lying in my back and breathing it out,
Because what’s a human without hope?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 7/28/2020 12:08:00 PM
thank you for comments. if only this could be a problem free utopia, but it cannot. but we need to change what we can but it must be with as much courage and kindness and intelligence and good taste as much as possible. be well. see my facebook, if feasible.
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Date: 8/6/2020 1:00:00 PM
i agree
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