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Fetch In the Muck

Through the thick of the fog I begged to the bog stumped by a stymied log. It was hollow of pride, like a zookeeper’s dog, reduced to bark-less hide. From the splat of my thud It wore polka-spot mud and rolled just because It knew what It was to snap unjustified. So what could I do but prove what It knew with another attack on the cripple I threw? If cracking my back playing fetch in the muck was the point of It all - I’m stuck. 12/11/2018

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Date: 12/12/2018 1:48:00 PM
Polka-spot mud, bet that's never been said before, you are the BOSS Phillip, you should check out lady Labryrinth you are of the same mind!
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 12/12/2018 2:02:00 PM
The rare but ever so glorious moment when you look at a type-o and say, "eh, it close enough to working that it's probably poetic". Thank you, John, I'll scope out your poor friend who you say shares the same affliction as I. :)
Date: 12/12/2018 7:36:00 AM
We all get stuck just need friends to help us out
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 12/12/2018 2:37:00 PM
Or a big chain and a truck! Always good to see ya, Tim. Your avatar pic is probably my favorite of all that I've seen here. It's just joyous. Pure and simple.

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