Ferris Wheel Rides

The honky-tonk music of ferris wheel rides Still enchant, as I used to stretch my hands To gather a chain of moondust above A glittered skytop, while the breeze drones Evening's jubilant melody: And the lilting rhythm of a float's cadence thrills While girlhood days screech after three, four circles As Daddy laughs, bringing forth the sizzle Of warm hotdogs. O, how memorable the hushabye from a rickety carousel. But life seems absurdly mechanical today, Where robotic noise reigns the game, zooming: How plastic tickets computerized would never Become dulcet memoirs gently tucked Within a musical box. How modern scheme changes A once-anticipated warble of the ringmaster... Crooning youth's jingle as carnival arrives: Now, a recorded playlist jigs; I feel numb. 11/1/2017 Written for Eve Rover's The Sounds of the Past Theme: Photo 1

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Date: 11/5/2017 9:47:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Well written, Nette.
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Date: 11/4/2017 4:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win Nette...
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Date: 11/4/2017 4:12:00 PM
Congrats Nette :)
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Date: 11/4/2017 1:16:00 PM
Nette, congrats on your win, well done. John
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Date: 11/4/2017 11:44:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win ! The art exhibits and the food were my memories when the county fair came to town, besides my boys wanting on every ride . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/1/2017 11:48:00 AM
I would feel numb as well.. You wrote this very well...dulcet memoirs are always hidden in some place...
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Date: 11/1/2017 10:22:00 AM
Dear Nette: Nicely done my friend. Hope you've been keeping well. All the best then, Leon.
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Date: 11/1/2017 6:01:00 AM
Oh how we have moved from our care free days where all we had was school and chores and to run, laugh and play. Now it's work, bills and a numbing existence making it from week to week with bits of joy mixed in. Truly enjoyed reading this Nette. Great job.
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Date: 11/1/2017 4:56:00 AM
Wow Nette, you have expressed a melody of a write, so full of passion of a carousel within the past! You have written such a magnificent poem my friend, the numb feeling you have written about sure is real when you sometimes look towards the past in a certain light! Memories are a fickle thing, they come one minute then another they are gone, into the great oblivion to only be assessed at another heart-spent day! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/31/2017 5:40:00 PM
Very well written Nette. I liked the expression in this :)
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Date: 10/31/2017 3:49:00 PM
.. memories that bring music ... we all love it - best wishes in the contest, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/31/2017 2:48:00 PM
A melody of past sounds depicted with beautiful lines--best for a win, nette!
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