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Ferris Wheel

Top of Ferris Wheel My shooting star pierced heaven Time runs slowly out

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Elaine George

Date: 10/7/2009 2:08:00 AM

Good one! Dear Sara. Love, Lainie

Marty Owens

Date: 10/6/2009 12:55:00 PM

Sara, I like this one. I'm studying Haiku and have read a lot of them. Thanks....Marty

Danny Nunn

Date: 10/6/2009 12:38:00 PM

An accurate and nice write..thanks for your words on "Graveyard Shift"..a body is meant to work while the Sun is shining, sleep at night..Danny

James Fraser

Date: 10/6/2009 11:33:00 AM

Kool piece Sara >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/6/2009 8:46:00 AM

Up up in the sky we go. Excellent Haiku Sara. Thank you for your kind remarks. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/6/2009 6:24:00 AM

nicely done

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/6/2009 6:20:00 AM

nicely penned

Nola Perez

Date: 10/6/2009 4:38:00 AM

Sara, I have a poem called "Ferris Wheel" I will post it for you. Thanks for commenting on my today poem. Curiously enough I woke in the wee hours with the title on my tongue, and had to get up & write it down. At first I thought maybe I was being given a new title for my poetry collection-in-progress (instead of The Tidal Heart & Other Poems) but No, it was simply a little poem trying to get out. Nola w. love

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/5/2009 9:48:00 PM

Nice work, keep writing...Raul

River Anton

Date: 10/5/2009 8:02:00 PM

I read this about ten times over before commenting. Probably one of the best Haikus i've read in a while. Good job. onelove.

p sheart

Date: 10/5/2009 3:03:00 PM

Love this one! Love the mystique in this one. It also has a powerful messsage, smile....Keep writing hun. Love Patty