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Ferris Wheel

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My shooting star pierced heaven
Time runs slowly out

allegorydeathintrospectionlifenaturehaiku

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Elaine George

October 7, 2009 at 2:08 AM

Good one! Dear Sara. Love, Lainie

Marty Owens

October 6, 2009 at 12:55 PM

Sara, I like this one. I'm studying Haiku and have read a lot of them. Thanks....Marty

Danny Nunn

October 6, 2009 at 12:38 PM

An accurate and nice write..thanks for your words on "Graveyard Shift"..a body is meant to work while the Sun is shining, sleep at night..Danny

James Fraser

October 6, 2009 at 11:33 AM

Kool piece Sara >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 6, 2009 at 8:46 AM

Up up in the sky we go. Excellent Haiku Sara. Thank you for your kind remarks. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

October 6, 2009 at 6:24 AM

nicely done

Doris Culverhouse

October 6, 2009 at 6:20 AM

nicely penned

Nola Perez

October 6, 2009 at 4:38 AM

Sara, I have a poem called "Ferris Wheel" I will post it for you. Thanks for commenting on my today poem. Curiously enough I woke in the wee hours with the title on my tongue, and had to get up & write it down. At first I thought maybe I was being given a new title for my poetry collection-in-progress (instead of The Tidal Heart & Other Poems) but No, it was simply a little poem trying to get out. Nola w. love