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Ferris Wheel

Top of Ferris Wheel My shooting star pierced heaven Time runs slowly out

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/7/2009 2:08:00 AM
Good one! Dear Sara. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/6/2009 12:55:00 PM
Sara, I like this one. I'm studying Haiku and have read a lot of them. Thanks....Marty
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Date: 10/6/2009 12:38:00 PM
An accurate and nice write..thanks for your words on "Graveyard Shift"..a body is meant to work while the Sun is shining, sleep at night..Danny
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Date: 10/6/2009 11:33:00 AM
Kool piece Sara >> James
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Date: 10/6/2009 8:46:00 AM
Up up in the sky we go. Excellent Haiku Sara. Thank you for your kind remarks. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/6/2009 6:24:00 AM
nicely done
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Date: 10/6/2009 6:20:00 AM
nicely penned
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Date: 10/6/2009 4:38:00 AM
Sara, I have a poem called "Ferris Wheel" I will post it for you. Thanks for commenting on my today poem. Curiously enough I woke in the wee hours with the title on my tongue, and had to get up & write it down. At first I thought maybe I was being given a new title for my poetry collection-in-progress (instead of The Tidal Heart & Other Poems) but No, it was simply a little poem trying to get out. Nola w. love
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Date: 10/5/2009 9:48:00 PM
Nice work, keep writing...Raul
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Date: 10/5/2009 8:02:00 PM
I read this about ten times over before commenting. Probably one of the best Haikus i've read in a while. Good job. onelove.
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Date: 10/5/2009 3:03:00 PM
Love this one! Love the mystique in this one. It also has a powerful messsage, smile....Keep writing hun. Love Patty
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