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Feral Cat

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pair of amber jades set in glistening black foil~ rats scurry in fear April.6. 2022 Black Cat Poetry Contest Sponsor-Robert James Liguori

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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/7/2022 8:20:00 PM
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Ha, ha! Some people have told me, 'You're a big rat, Wolf!' Now I know why -- I'm scurrying from your feral cat too... Nicely done, Valsa. ~ On the Move..
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Debra L Brown
Date: 4/6/2022 8:47:00 PM
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I like how you described the eyes as: Amber Jades, enjoyed. Blessings ~ Debra
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John Lawless
Date: 4/6/2022 1:44:00 PM
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..."set in glistening black foil"....WOW....that would scare the crap out of Baso's frog.....great write Valsa...
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/6/2022 11:42:00 AM
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Hello Valsa, I like the color of the eyes. I have never seen a feral cat. Hugs.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 4/6/2022 8:16:00 AM
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Might try it if I spot a mouse. Fortunately up to now I only saw one in my lifetime. Lovely poem though.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/6/2022 7:24:00 AM
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"pair of amber jades" - love the perfect description, Valsa. Excellent haiku!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/6/2022 5:27:00 AM
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I see the cat--I see the rats---images well invoked in this descriptive write. Succinct-- well done!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/6/2022 4:45:00 AM
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You captured the cat ready to pounce well Valsa. Enjoy the day. Tom
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JCB Brul
Date: 4/6/2022 4:05:00 AM
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I love the "pair of amber gems". So uniquely yours. All the best dear friend.
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Anil Deo
Date: 4/6/2022 2:11:00 AM
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Absolutely a gem. Maybe I ought to FAVE all your nature poems sister Valso. The foil metaphor & contrast/ canvas ... Blew me over
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