Female Menopause

~Female Menopause~ Skin that was so soft with the glow still upon it, Smooth and luscious and warm to caress, Young and lovely it used to be, Not now, oh woe, my skin is a mess. I shaved my legs my underarms too, I never thought I’d grow a beard just like you. Why did this happen and why is it now? I’m not that age yet, no I’m not, no how. I’m nearly old enough to be a granny Never mind a loving wife, It crept upon me with stealth, Through the days of my short life. The telly, it tells me each and every day, That my skin looses elasticity I’m sick of the telly and the creams that don’t work. I ply them all over with a spade and a fork. My skin needs some moisture, or so they say, I’ve found a good supply, a bottle of white wine each day My skin now still glows, but it’s covered in sweat, I’m dripping and ripping my clothes off and yet. It’s not in the heat of the moment that I do it, No passion, no lust, I just find I’m going through it. I never thought I’d have to ask you, How to shave my chin and get it smooth too. I’ll be invisible, bearded, fat and ignored, So sign me up now for a freak show abroad. At least in the sun I’ll have reason to sweat No on will know but I’m not finished just yet.
©~GG~2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 11/10/2012 2:24:00 PM
will not change inner beauty, bet you got plenty of that.....
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Date: 8/10/2012 9:37:00 AM
nice poem thankyou for your coment on mine love poem I like the word combinations very insightful xx david scott
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Date: 8/4/2012 6:05:00 AM
A woman's road, menopause. Mandy, I guess the new stage is as good as the previous if we lean to live in that new skin. We have to find the secret of menopausal life. Maybe someone out there knows what it is. Enjoyed the poem but feel a bit scared.
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Date: 7/20/2012 6:41:00 AM
love your sense of humor in this write Mandy...I did not receive the soup mail yet...luv...Joseph
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Date: 7/20/2012 3:41:00 AM
Yes us ladies have to go through so much, I am not there yet but I do feel for you, & I agree with Ann you are not finished yet, live your life to the fullest it's all part of our journey, much love to you Mandy & thanx for stopping by :)
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Date: 7/20/2012 3:38:00 AM
...and humour! did I forget HUMOUR!)
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Date: 7/20/2012 3:37:00 AM
Brilliant! A title no man can ignore... lovely cadence and rhyme, and fantastic language and imagery! BRAVO Mandy!! Best wishes, Keith :)
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Date: 7/20/2012 3:22:00 AM
Not at all Mandy...you are not finished yet...live your life....be you and be happy.To be a grandma is just fun. - Have a lovely day and shaved your legs. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/20/2012 2:13:00 AM
:)just b yorself.Never lose yor spirit and all other things wil automatically take care of themselves.Lovely poem.
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