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"felt Season"

The naked trees have melted their colors to the ground... The cool air wilts the flowers and steals the birds sound... The vision is chilled and profound... "Welcome Winter Contest" by Carol Brown

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Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/28/2010 8:05:00 PM

A very true and different picture Micheal. Many congrats for this win.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/28/2010 7:13:00 PM

Perfectly described. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/28/2010 6:06:00 PM

I like this one Michael J. Superbly executed poem all the way around. Into my favs. Congratulations to you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2010 5:15:00 PM

wow, though short, I find it one of the most beautiful in its imagery! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/28/2010 4:18:00 PM

Congrats my W.K. on your wonderful win in Carol's cool contest with this exceptional entry on welcoming Winter luv... enjoy another big win this happy Sunday with luv... YEAH GIANTS..but it was an edge of my seat game yes? a WIN is a WIN..we will take it luv.. J.G. forever..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/28/2010 3:16:00 PM

Short but very sweet...congrats to you. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/28/2010 2:45:00 PM

Congratulations on the win for this excellent entry to the contest, Michael

John Freeman

Date: 11/28/2010 2:36:00 PM

Felt Season, aptly describs winter to me Michael. "Congratulations on your worthy poem's recognition!" Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/28/2010 2:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Michael! Love and blessings, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/28/2010 1:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in my "Welcoming Winter"contest Michael. Love, Carol 11/28/2010

James Fraser

Date: 11/4/2010 3:23:00 PM

Good luck in Carol's contest with this well written winter Quintain >> James :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/4/2010 1:43:00 PM

the storm is just beginning to brew. john

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/4/2010 6:39:00 AM

A terrific quintain with a wonderful winter scene, Michael. Best wishes in Carol's contest! Love, Carolyn

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/4/2010 6:09:00 AM

A very true and apt image. Many thanks for your comments.

John Rhinem

Date: 11/2/2010 4:44:00 PM

Smile ~ I like the duel or beyond images invoked amid this soulfully brushed poe "My Dear & Talented Friend, Michael J. Falotico!!!'" ~ Just a matter of fact or, a metaphor towards something a bit more stirringly profound; either or, "Beautifully Brushed" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Evening My Friend;" Bye!:) ~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/2/2010 4:15:00 PM

This excellent write is sure to be in the winners' circle..Good luck with this sure winner...Sara

James Peranteau

Date: 11/2/2010 1:23:00 PM

A felt season indeed poet...yet for me, the longed one ! Great write ! much love, james

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/2/2010 11:53:00 AM

A dreary vision, perfectly described but still beautiful in it's own way, Michael..excellent Quintain. Wishing you good luck in Carol's "Welcome Winter Contest". Always, Audrey

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/2/2010 9:57:00 AM

A very nice welcome to the Winter with nice images, Michael. Good luck

De R

Date: 11/2/2010 9:05:00 AM

This is really beautiful, Michael. I the images brought up by this Quintain. Best wishes in the contest! Emilia

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 11/2/2010 9:02:00 AM

a touching, deeply structured poem

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/2/2010 9:02:00 AM

Good luck sweetie in the contest ..luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/2/2010 9:02:00 AM

Lovely Quintain Michael.. very believable in your descriptive lines so vividly written..luv.. always appreciate your sense of style in capturing the reader my White Knight.. your forever Jersey Girl .. freezing today in her leopard coat....