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A revision of the song Too good to ever last. Putting a positive spin on it.

Fell so hard...and fell so fast Vs 1 When we first met, I never thought that I could ever love you My own selfish pride, told me that I was so above you Bridge (but...) I love the way you stare, with your sparkling eyes I love the way you laugh, out loud until you cry I love the way you move, with such grace and finesse I love the words you use, the way you catch your breath Chorus I see I fell so hard...and I fell so fast I fin'ly found a love... I knew was gonna last Now all the bad times... from all the past loves Have faded... now of you...I can't get enough I see I fell so hard...and I fell so fast Vs 2 I remember when you said our first kiss gave you the shivers And every time that we make love I watch you gently quiver Bridge I love the way you stare, with your sparkling eyes I love the way you laugh, out loud until you cry I love the way you move, with such grace and finesse I love the words you use, the way you catch your breath Chorus I see I fell so hard...and I fell so fast I fine'ly found a love... I knew was gonna last Now all the bad times... from all the past loves Have faded,...now of you... I can't get enough I see I fell so hard...and I fell so fast Postlude Now in the heart of the night, I can't stop thinking of you And when I finally fall asleep, I start dreaming of you.... I see I fell so hard...and I fell so fast I see I fell so hard...and I fell so fast I see I fell so hard...and I fell so fast repeat and fade John Derek Hamilton November 20 2020

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Date: 11/22/2020 3:32:00 PM
I'm not much of a lyricist, but this one gets two thumbs up from me, John. Light and Illumination, Gershon
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Date: 11/23/2020 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Gershon I appreciate the visit and nice comment!
Date: 11/21/2020 8:10:00 PM
funny how love works, even when you don't want to fall it happens... love the way you composed this one John, wonderfully well written lyrics ... :) hugs
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Date: 11/22/2020 8:42:00 AM
Hey thanks Sandy so nice to "see" you pass by, hope you're feeling better.
Date: 11/21/2020 12:00:00 PM
You write lyrics so well, I tried, but I didn't do very well... Maybe because I'm not a musician.. so many hearts will feel your words..
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Date: 11/22/2020 8:42:00 AM
Yeah that's true SO, that's why me and Greg and John Watt, and Mark Massey write them, being a musician helps a lot, but don't worry you are so outstanding in other facets of writing that it's not a problem. I can't write like you either, we all have different gifts!
Date: 11/21/2020 5:57:00 AM
Finding love can erase all the bitterness from the past. I had such a love, John, and whether it lasts or not, the beautiful memories of that kind of love never fade. Your lyrics are excellent and memorable.
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/21/2020 6:35:00 AM
Thanks Jenna nice to have you pass by my page today with your gracious comments, I am thankful!
Date: 11/20/2020 5:19:00 PM
Beautifully romantic, John. Loved the tone and rhythm of your song--a touch of melancholy enhances the emotions of love. Artfully done! A definite FAVE for me. All the best for much success in recording this masterpiece.
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/20/2020 8:32:00 PM
Thanks Vijay, wow a big thank you for your kind words of support and especially the fave, that is very special to me, I do have high hopes for this one!
Date: 11/20/2020 5:05:00 PM
Hi John, These are some great lyrics! It's not about heartbeat, it's about love and romance. I would love to hear this on the radio. If it was in the stores, I would most definitely get a copy. Have a great evening and weekend:-) Alexis
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/20/2020 8:30:00 PM
Thanks Lexi for your kind words of support, I'm so glad you like it that much!
Date: 11/20/2020 4:56:00 PM
Wonderful lyrics, happily sung!
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/20/2020 8:29:00 PM
Thanks Caren I appreciate it!
Date: 11/20/2020 4:26:00 PM
fab lyrics John would love to hear it set to music:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/20/2020 4:32:00 PM
Thanks Jan. I found a composer and he's working on it as we speak, here's to hoping!