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Felix Culpa

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Written: March 12. 2025 For contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh ****************** I wonder if you cared when you cried, I wonder if you cared apropos of your pride. Maybe I was foolish for your narcissism, Luxury once trumped passion and eroticism. We are all bound by a burden of pain, We bear suffering and raise his stain. Amid our trials, there is no glint of hope, In the depths of night, rebirth may grope. You still need my avail express emotion, I am navigating the ups and downs of devotion. Dying is our beacon of hope and light, the eternal path of righteousness and delight. Signs and myths twirl in seamless discord, Shades cover timid awe, grasps of pity chord. Envy and resentment drove love to break, Amid the gloom of a clique, sparkle may awake. Witches and wizards mumble screams, Warlocks generate visions of dragon flight. Gypsy fortune-telling witch exudes delight, Wicca magic casts spells under moonlit streams. Druid chants echo through earth-based rites, Typical magic thrives as crystal balls shine bright. "Namaste" uttered in a cauldron of warm light,  The pendulum swings, revealing secret sights. Acrylic nails click against the clothesline, Rainbow fades away, but buzzkill cannot stay. Attached to slime naturally bright day sway. Reflect on regret while listening to forces divine.

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Date: 4/8/2025 8:59:00 PM
"Dying is our beacon of hope and light, the eternal path of righteousness and delight." Even in an apparent curse, there is promise of rebirth and renewal ! Death is something we abhor, but only through death we are born into eternal life. Dear Lasaad, your knowledge of all subjects- here it is sorcery and witch craft- is amazing and your diction superb! Hearty Congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 4/8/2025 12:06:00 AM
Back with heartfelt congratulations, dear poet, on your top win in this poetry contest with a wonderful poem that could also have been crafted for the tipping balance. Particularly appreciated the following 3 lines "I am navigating the ups and downs of devotion. Dying is our beacon of hope and light, the eternal path of righteousness and delight.". Wish you a pleasant day filled with the light of blessings
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Date: 4/7/2025 7:26:00 AM
A very well-deserved top win for another excellent poem from your pen, congratulations
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Date: 4/7/2025 4:15:00 AM
Lasaad, this is an excellent piece. I absolutely loved it. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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