Caren Krutsinger Poet Haibun

Feldspar Is My Rock

Collecting rocks on a summer’s day, I marveled at the sparkles I see as I turn them over. The sun and I are smiling at the glitzy glamor we notice.  I pick them out of the forest deep, and wash them in the tiny brook that meanders through in the prettiest, softest, sweetest way. Fascinated by the prettiness I find, I cannot help but wonder if I am their first human contact. This delights me and the sun.

			              feldspar in my rock
                                  glitzy diamond like relief
                                          proof of loving god

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M. L. Kiser December 20, 2019 at 1:07 PM As a jewelry maker and a friend of rocks; I had to "fav" this. Caren Krutsinger December 20, 2019 at 2:24 PM My maiden name was Stone.

Eve Roper December 12, 2019 at 10:14 PM Nice Haibun, Caren, I too like to collect rocks . I am fascinated by the color shape and luster. Caren Krutsinger December 20, 2019 at 2:25 PM I love everything about them.

Pratap Roy December 12, 2019 at 10:03 PM Very good presentation. God bless you. Caren Krutsinger December 20, 2019 at 2:25 PM Thank you Pratap.

Ann Foster December 12, 2019 at 9:33 AM Lovely this morning. Perfect with my coffee.... Ann Caren Krutsinger December 12, 2019 at 10:13 AM Thank you Ann.

Demetrios Trifiatis December 12, 2019 at 5:07 AM Fabulous dear, Caren! Caren Krutsinger December 12, 2019 at 10:13 AM Thank you Demetrios.