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Feldspar Is My Rock

Collecting rocks on a summer’s day, I marveled at the sparkles I see as I turn them over. The sun and I are smiling at the glitzy glamor we notice. I pick them out of the forest deep, and wash them in the tiny brook that meanders through in the prettiest, softest, sweetest way. Fascinated by the prettiness I find, I cannot help but wonder if I am their first human contact. This delights me and the sun. feldspar in my rock glitzy diamond like relief proof of loving god

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Date: 12/20/2019 1:07:00 PM
As a jewelry maker and a friend of rocks; I had to "fav" this.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/20/2019 2:24:00 PM
My maiden name was Stone.
Date: 12/12/2019 10:14:00 PM
Nice Haibun, Caren, I too like to collect rocks . I am fascinated by the color shape and luster.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/20/2019 2:25:00 PM
I love everything about them.
Date: 12/12/2019 10:03:00 PM
Very good presentation. God bless you.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/20/2019 2:25:00 PM
Thank you Pratap.
Date: 12/12/2019 9:33:00 AM
Lovely this morning. Perfect with my coffee.... Ann
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/12/2019 10:13:00 AM
Thank you Ann.
Date: 12/12/2019 5:07:00 AM
Fabulous dear, Caren!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/12/2019 10:13:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios.

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