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She feels the whispers of the wind so deep within her heart and reaches for the pen to make her feelings known --- right from the start With fingers wrapped around the instrument, the tool held gently in her grip upon the silky unstained parchment does the ink so slowly start to drip As thoughts begin to pour out from her soul does this poetic dance begin anew along the parchment stylus slowly glides as uncontrollably, the viscous ink begins to spew --- February 26, 2019

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Date: 2/27/2019 10:17:00 PM
Bravo, John. This is a gem.
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/28/2019 4:20:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 2/27/2019 10:06:00 PM
Congratulations John, on this win. :) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/28/2019 4:14:00 AM
Thank you, Brandy, i appreciate it.
Date: 2/26/2019 8:43:00 PM
Hello John...quite the poet you are! Such delicate imagery. Panagiota
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/26/2019 9:15:00 PM
Thank you, Panagiota, I appreciate your wonderful comments. John
Date: 2/26/2019 2:03:00 PM
Hello John Gondolf, I can see her pen flow with the words pouring out onto the paper. Nicely done. have a nice day my friend.
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/26/2019 3:15:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene, I appreciate it. John
Date: 2/26/2019 10:32:00 AM
Inspiration is everywhere. This is beautiful my dear friend. Poetry drifts through the wind. :) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/26/2019 10:53:00 AM
Thank you, Brandy, my inspiration truly drifts along the wind. You and your thoughts are appreciated my sweet friend. John
Date: 2/26/2019 9:01:00 AM
the first sparks of poetic inspiration well captured by your spilled ink... very good one, john!..hugs
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/26/2019 9:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Nette, I appreciate you and your thoughts. John

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