Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

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- Feelings of Guilt -

Hold back the tears of sorrow

                   Imprisoned in this torment bounded by guilt

                          As I write your name on the wall

                        I miss the days when you were here















02.02.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Debbie Duncan May 8, 2017 at 10:00 PM I for sure thought I read this before. Cute :) Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2017 at 3:23 AM - Debbie, thank you very much for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter March 4, 2017 at 7:01 PM How did I miss this??? It's so dear! How broken hearted I would be if I lost my little companion. Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2017 at 8:02 AM - Thank you very much for visit and comments, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie February 25, 2017 at 1:11 PM Oh, the poor pup :-) your words are so poignant and the photo so funny..it took me a bit to put the two together.:-) A very clever, smart poem Anne-Lise, wonderfully crafted, an absolute pleasure to read. many blessings to you, lynn Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2017 at 1:54 PM - Lynn, thank you very much for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon February 7, 2017 at 4:30 PM With these lines and the illustration, I got awed. Nice craf, Anne. Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2017 at 2:07 AM - Thank you very much, for visit and comments, Adeniji :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White February 7, 2017 at 3:25 AM Awwww, this made me snicker, how sad! LOL Anne-Lise Andresen February 7, 2017 at 4:00 AM - Darren, thank you very much for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray February 6, 2017 at 9:05 AM I love your idea of fun Anne-Lise. Yet another picture I must download, if you don't mind. Anne-Lise Andresen February 6, 2017 at 9:14 AM - The image is yours, Jean :) - Thank you very much, for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman February 5, 2017 at 5:39 PM I guess the only way to get loose is when the lady toots! Too funny Sunshine~thanks for the chuckle!~Che :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2017 at 6:18 PM - Cheryl, thank you very much for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus February 5, 2017 at 12:44 PM The poem in itself is quite sad, Anne-Lise. Then I look at the accompanying picture and sadness turns to laughter! Also, I love those cute tiny dogs running beneath the flowers:) Regards & Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2017 at 6:17 PM - Thank you very much Paul, for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Herlihy February 5, 2017 at 9:00 AM It's true. Sorrow brings its own misery, but it makes for good poetry. JH Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2017 at 11:47 AM - Thank you very much for visit and comments, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wendy Rycroft February 5, 2017 at 8:03 AM Funny and sad x great words x Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2017 at 8:14 AM - Thank you very much Wendy, for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

CayCay Godwin February 5, 2017 at 7:13 AM The words are so serious and the pic so darn funny that my head and heart are fighting this one out! Seems you got me! Hugs ... CayCay Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2017 at 7:38 AM - CayCay, thank you very much for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May February 5, 2017 at 6:15 AM Hello Sunshine...thanks for this funny treat...Nicely done Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2017 at 7:37 AM - Thank you very much for visit and comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett February 5, 2017 at 6:01 AM Absolutely brilliant, you've got an amazing sense of humour Anne-Lise, Just what the doctor ordered a good laugh, thanks, Roy. Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2017 at 7:37 AM - Thank you very much Roy,for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carol B. February 4, 2017 at 6:04 PM OMG this made me laugh. Thanks!! A fav. Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2017 at 7:36 AM - Thank you very much for visit a fav. and comments, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud February 4, 2017 at 8:03 AM ohh, this is so funny; love the way this pet was tucked! good one, anne and happy huggs! Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2017 at 7:35 AM - Nette, thank you very much for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior February 3, 2017 at 10:33 PM LOL...we've got to be careful where we sit...I hope Foofoo was not hurt lol...great verse SS...god bless...^WW^ Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2017 at 7:35 AM - Thank you very much for visit and comments, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf February 3, 2017 at 7:28 PM I'm still laughing at your pic! Makes it hard to concentrate on the poem itself! Great poem! Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2017 at 7:34 AM - Thank you very much for visit and comments, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire February 3, 2017 at 12:53 PM Anne-Lise, the picture you posted gave me a great laugh, but the poem stirred feelings of regret "imprisoned" in my heart. Sometimes I feel guilty that I lived so much longer than my husband. You captured this feeling beautifully! Hugs, Carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen February 3, 2017 at 1:05 PM - Oh, dear Carolyn a terrible guilt ... no one can decide on life or death ... I became really sorry by your comments - Enjoy your life my friend ! - hugs & hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis February 3, 2017 at 10:06 AM The moral of the story: Never sit down when you have a small puppy and you are large! Haha! Love poem, hilarious picture! A seven dear, Anne-Lise! Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen February 3, 2017 at 1:27 PM - :))) .... So true :) - Next time I am looking for one of my dogs ... now I know :))) - Many thanks for your visit a 7 and your comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner February 3, 2017 at 8:35 AM The poem is sweet but that picture is hilarious, Anne Lise. Poor little puppy:) Thanks for the laugh:) Anne-Lise Andresen February 3, 2017 at 1:11 PM - Guilt is everything but, not sweet if you ask me - Glad the picture gave you a smile :) - Thanks for visiting and your comments, Daniel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green February 3, 2017 at 8:23 AM What seemed as if it should be dark and sad made me laugh out loud. Perfect my friend. :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 3, 2017 at 1:19 PM - I think it became very "dark" for the little puppy ... poor little thing :) - Many thanks for your visit and your comments, Chris - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison February 3, 2017 at 5:56 AM hilari'arse' lol fab poem and pic Anne lise thanks for the smile:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen February 3, 2017 at 7:34 AM - Many thanks for your visit and your smile, Jan ... it's so easy to lose small things :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)