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Feeling's Fate

The best and only choice of pen
                      is one that lets me write again
When Muse has had his sleepy time  
          to pause on thought for lines of rhyme 

For only then from ebb to flow
                        will inspiration come to show
And lines to gather feeling’s fate
                      will fill my starved poetic plate

Oh pen, with just your stalwart stroke 
         please guide my hand lest it may choke
And let my senses, pure and wise
                    unveil perhaps, a sweet surprise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 7/3/2023 5:05:00 PM
love this , Mike, and i love the flow of it.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/4/2023 5:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea, Happy 4th xxoo
Date: 7/3/2023 1:53:00 PM
Your pen sure unveiled a sweet surprise, Mike. Your poetic prowess always shines in your signature style.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/4/2023 5:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay!
Date: 7/3/2023 12:27:00 PM
Love this one Mike. A favorite for it tells a tale we writers experience from time to time. Perfect words my friend.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/4/2023 5:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Michael!!
Date: 7/3/2023 12:16:00 PM
So nice Mike! You describe it well. May your poem flow with your beautiful writing . I enjoyed :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/4/2023 5:25:00 AM
Thank you Heidi, Happy 4th!!!
Date: 7/3/2023 11:21:00 AM
Hello Gentile Mike, This is wonderful. I say- Let that pen flow. Until the ink runs out. Happy Monday.-Darlene\
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/4/2023 5:36:00 AM
Thank yo so much Darlene xxoo
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/3/2023 11:23:00 AM
Hello Gentile, Happy 4th of July Day. xxxx-oooo./darlene\
Date: 7/3/2023 10:16:00 AM
Mike, I love poems ending with a twist. A charming and elegant poem.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/3/2023 10:54:00 AM
Thank you who much Victor!
Date: 7/3/2023 7:44:00 AM
Love this very much!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/3/2023 10:54:00 AM
Thanks Kim, Happy Sunday!
Date: 7/3/2023 6:34:00 AM
Yes yes yes
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/3/2023 10:54:00 AM
Thank you Alex!

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