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he could always give me that rush of insane power, he played a song to my heart and it played the beat, he had my stomach all over the place as he taught it to dance, a beautiful dance and cart wheels too, i could feel the ground trembling beneath me, and my senses fell through the cracks, all i could do was feel, i could feel him close, his warm breath and tight grip finished me, and that's when he gave me something worth smiling about, he gave me that rush of insane power all over again...

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Date: 1/31/2016 7:45:00 PM
Sasha, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
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Date: 11/26/2011 2:13:00 AM
Thank you for the comments.
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Date: 11/25/2011 11:49:00 PM
sasha welcome to poetry soup.its a good effort.Like ur feelings ur words are also very deep.keep it up.
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Sasha Todorov
Date: 11/26/2011 2:15:00 AM
thank you! I hope to write some More and post them up soon.
Date: 11/22/2011 5:33:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Sasha. I am sorry to be late welcoming you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 11/21/2011 9:00:00 PM
Nicely expressed sentiments, sasha
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Date: 11/26/2011 2:59:00 AM
thank you! I hope to write some More and post them up soon.

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