Feeling Worthless

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“The worst is feeling worthless.” Quote: Donald Glover I tip the scales. Life curtails. In luminous light To suffer delight. Yielding bend. New age trend. Wanting to break. Now awake. Softly spoken. Appearing broken. Never cherished. Hopes perished. Always alone. Hearts of stone. Meandering. Never pandering. Solace is mine. Gives me a sign. I wander on. Comfort gone. Feeling free. Serendipity. Born of the earth. Little worth. Mother of mine. Minds entwine. Often mistake. For angels sake. Wishes plummet. Unreachable summit. Never to be. Don’t pity me. All forlorn. Vow is sworn. Radical change. Must rearrange. Nights slip by. Wondering why. Wander to edges. Witness alleges. Of life’s torment. Self can only repent. Watching the clock. Taking stock. Time is tragic. Feel the magic. Wont commence. Its all pretense. Solitary one knows. Let the door close. Beat a different drum. Let the doubters come. Find my heart. Don’t let teardrops start. Bequeath to me. All that’s free. Guide me to bliss. A lollypop kiss. The forlorn sorrows. Yesterday’s tomorrows. Of this earth. Absolutely no worth.

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Silpika Kalita

Date: 3/25/2024 3:09:00 AM

The pic reminds of child labour. In fact, in India, each poverty -stricken kid is going through the pain of each line, in other parts of the world with different issues, horror of war, negligence etc.True poetic depiction

Speaks Volumes
Date: 3/25/2024 4:57:00 AM

The feeling of worthlessness is often accompanied by silence Silpika. Tears maybe, but often just silence. I appreciate your words, and if in some way this can be a voice, for those unable to speak, it is my honor to have written it. Children are so vulnerable to the ravages of cruelty and despair. Thank you for taking the time to comment.

Christina Bowring

Date: 3/24/2024 12:19:00 PM

Dearest Kindred spirit, before even reading the poem, the haunting picture of that beautiful child has impact. This is such a heart rendering read full of raw emotion, deep feelings, isolation and a struggle with self worth. The anguish here right from childhood and the neglect of emotional needs are intensely palpable as the years go on and the struggles continue. A tormented, lonely soul and yet there is yearning there, an acknowledgment of the need to achieve, ‘ radical change’’ must

Speaks Volumes
Date: 3/24/2024 6:08:00 PM

I am somewhat out of my element writing in this style Chris. It's since Empress and Hiya introduced it to Soup, that I have adapted to change. Not that I presume to compare my work to theirs, I don't have that descriptive ability, but I am slowly finding my own "niche" of rhyming in short bursts. I am learning that it can be effective. Thank you so much for your supportive comments. They are so appreciated... Love Wen

Christina Bowring
Date: 3/24/2024 12:33:00 PM

rearrange’. An inner strength to defy the past and with believe, be led to a better life. Those last few lines are very poignant. Letting go of the past, ‘ yesterday’s tomorrow ‘ will be an inner quest not easy to find and achieve. I like the period end stops - it gives a pause for reflection. ‘ lolly pop kisses’ is profound to me and brings me back to that uncherished child. This is powerful dear one and a good reminder for all about self worth and the lack of it for many. Thank you for sharing. Hugs and blessings xx

Tom Woody

Date: 3/21/2024 1:47:00 PM

Poignant poetry SV. I have a close relative who struggles with this everyday. I try to be his best friend but it's tough. I love lollipop kisses!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 3/21/2024 6:01:00 PM

Sorry to hear about your relative, it takes great effort to make a person who feels worthless, feel special again. Good luck with your endeavor. I am not fond of strawberries, I find them sour, so what better than lollipop kisses? Thanks for your comment Tom.

I Am Anaya

Date: 3/21/2024 1:07:00 PM

It's never too late to reinvent oneself, re-assured! "Radical change is key--Must rearrange" New format? a period after each line, could it be you are tired of the double blue lines? You Wen, no doubt have proven worthy in the highest realms there are. A reminder to all, what is our self-worth, how can we be sure of our meaning. Poignant and worth a million pounds!:)

Speaks Volumes
Date: 3/21/2024 5:56:00 PM

The periods were subconscious. I punctuate the way I read it. This one was my muse dictating individual thoughts. So they were written all as one liners. It wasn't a statement, although I guess it does seem a bit jerky. C'est la vie. Thanks for the wise words in your comment my friend, you enhance my writing and it is greatly appreciated. . . Wen