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I Need To Be More Thankful Everyday!

Feeling Sorry For Myself

Life threw me a curve last Tuesday
You can't believe the pain I felt
It cut to my very soul
So I found a rabbit hole....
And started feeling sorry for myself!

So in the very early morning
I heard a knock at my heart's door
The Lord said....If you want me to...
I'll be giving you....
Something to be really sorry for!

I said...Lord the strangest thing just happened!
My blues went flying out the door!
And I want you to know....
Just before you go...
I'm not feeling sorry...anymore!

By...Chuck Melugin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Thomas Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 7:57 PM
Just checking on you my friend. I know I haven't been around, but it does not seem you have been here much either. How are you doing Chuck?
Kendrick Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 9:49 AM
Good one. We all get those doldrums sometimes. Even Elijah did and he was a great man. God knew how to straighten you out though did He not? Sara
Melugin Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 4:31 PM
Yes He Did! Thanks so much Sara!
Rose  Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 11:42 AM
lol I just love those conversations with God, I find them to be very therapeutic. Please read Murder In The Tunnel, ad you will understand. thanks for the read.
Melugin Avatar
January 30, 2021 at 8:00 PM
Thanks Rose! I appreciate your kind words!
Eslinger Avatar
January 27, 2021 at 8:59 AM
My first read of your very fine work. Made me smile. A very nice exchange with our Lord. Hugs!
Melugin Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Thanks so much Sally! May our Lord bless you!
Ball Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 2:53 AM
Excellent Chuck. We have so much to be thankful for that when we start feeling sorry for ourselves we only have to count our blessings to see that the blessings far outweigh the curses. Good Stuff. God Bless, JB
Melugin Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 1:45 PM
Thanks Judy! I appreciate your kind words!
Horsman Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 10:01 PM
To be given something to be sorry for, puts you straight. These are amazing limericks, Chuck. More please.
Melugin Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 2:21 PM
Thanks Harry! Be safe! You are an amazing poet and a great friend!
Ball Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 11:59 PM
Well done Chuck God Bless, JB.
Melugin Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 12:40 PM
Thank You very much Judy!
Fowler Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 6:08 AM
Brilliant Chuck. Blessings to ya! Linda
Melugin Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Thank you Linda! Headed to your treasures!
Thomas Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 2:17 PM
Lol I know how you feel! Trying to make sure I'm more thankful each day :) Just making sure, did you mean to have the word "go" in there twice in the second to last line? Take care Chuck!
Thomas Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 5:14 PM
Aww you're such a sweetie!!!
Melugin Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 3:56 PM
Thanks so much. I so appreciate you finding the typo. You are a wonderful friend and a great poetess!
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