Komal Walimbe Poet Free verse

Feeling of Success

Today I was dreaming, 
How amazing it might feel to be successful. 
The adrenaline and satisfaction would release enormously, 
The feeling of pride and overwhelming enthusiasm. 

So amazing to get it all and feel it all, 
So amazing to be the one and only. 
I wish someday this feeling, 
Come to me running, 
So I could finally be able to feel it all, 
And get it all! 

2/7/22

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Bill Baker July 28, 2022 at 4:29 PM Keep doing your best and the success and feelings of accomplishment will come to you, Homal. After reading a few of your poems today, I think success in closer than you realize. :-) Have a great week! Bill Komal Walimbe July 29, 2022 at 7:22 AM Ha, I am so glad that you went through my poems! Really appreciated! I was just wondering what it would be like to be successful and so the poem! Have a great week to you too Bill! Your poet friend- Komal!!!:)

Mystic Rose Rose July 5, 2022 at 3:25 PM Dear Komal, there is a thing called a vision board, you write all the things you want to achieve and then work towards them, I pray one day you will achieve many of your most dearest desires, nicely done, never been to India, but I hear its beautiful xo Komal Walimbe July 6, 2022 at 1:35 AM Yes I have heard about the vision board, I will try it too...Thank you so much for your kind message may you too accomplish great desires in life. Yes it is beautiful and rainy season has started here...Hope you are doing great ,thanks for stopping by!

Sara Kendrick July 5, 2022 at 12:09 PM Sometimes in life we are already successful, but we don't know it. I believe that you are successful, and that each year will add another level to your accomplishments. Your presence at my page was uplifting. Sara Komal Walimbe July 6, 2022 at 1:32 AM Yes Sara....I agree. May you too accomplish great desires and be successful in life...Thanks for stopping by and your kind message here. Heartly appreciated!!!