Warren Doll Poet Free verse

Feeling Numb and Out of Place

I never thought I would have to say that my youngest brother passed away
A freak accident took his life
Always thought that I would die first.
Feeling numb and out of place
Can’t see anything but his face
Constantly missing and mourning him 
Hoping to see him again someday

Rest in Peace- Michael

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Lady Labyrinth August 3, 2021 at 7:56 PM It is very sad when someone whom we love, so very close to us (or even estranged but still very much loved), moves on. I don't believe they ever truly leave us though Warren, they are always close by watching over us, or walking with us. Lots of love to you and those who loved your brother. xx Warren Doll August 5, 2021 at 5:45 AM Lady, thanks so much~ Warren

Kim Rodrigues May 6, 2020 at 4:42 PM So sorry to hear :( Warren Doll May 8, 2020 at 3:20 PM Thanks so much ,Kim. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Gail Debole February 10, 2020 at 5:24 PM Warren, You have my sympathies. Very nice heartfelt tribute. Warren Doll February 11, 2020 at 1:24 PM Gail, Thank you so much for your comments and visit. Al the best~ Warren

Vijay Pandit January 13, 2020 at 10:23 AM Reading again, your poem tugs the heart, Warren--you are right, no one should have to face this. Warren Doll January 14, 2020 at 1:28 PM Vijay, thanks for visiting again. Best Wishes~ Warren

Connie Marcum Wong January 11, 2020 at 10:52 PM I’m so sorry that you lost your brother. We always think we have so much time. I Think through the shock of it it’s more difficult to lose someone instantly. No time to say goodbye. Your lovely poem is very moving. Blessings for a happier new year. xxoo Warren Doll January 13, 2020 at 10:04 AM Connie, thank you so much for your very kind comments. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Jan Allison December 25, 2019 at 5:35 PM such a sad situation my thoughts are with you and your family Warren, I know this time of year can be very difficult for many. hugs Jan xx Warren Doll December 27, 2019 at 8:49 AM Hi Jan, trying to get back to writing poems again but it's been very difficult. Still in shock about my brother dying. Thanks for visit. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Joseph P. DiMino December 25, 2019 at 11:19 AM I deeply believe that such partings, though horrific, are temporary...and someday cherished ones will again be united in a loving, pain-free place. Blessings and prayers, my friend. Warren Doll December 27, 2019 at 8:42 AM Thanks Joe. I look forward to seeing him again. Happy New Year~ Warren

Andrea Dietrich November 10, 2019 at 8:03 PM so sorry this happened. It was recent? God bless you and your family in your grief. Warren Doll November 13, 2019 at 11:08 AM Thanks so much. Andrea.

Mike Gentile November 9, 2019 at 8:16 AM Warren, This is such a beautiful expression of love through the tears! Sometimes, words are all we have to give, A lovely tribute! Warren Doll November 10, 2019 at 10:42 AM You are so right. Thanks so much ,Mike. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Jennifer Proxenos October 22, 2019 at 1:30 PM You mentioned his passing in your reply to my last comment - losing a close relative is very traumatic - you have my heartfelt condolences Warren - blessings, Jennifer. Warren Doll October 24, 2019 at 9:28 AM Thank you, Jennifer

Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2019 at 3:25 PM So sorry you have lost your brother. That is sad news, especially being it was so sudden. A prayer headed your way. Warren Doll October 21, 2019 at 1:19 PM Thank you, Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2019 at 1:52 PM - Death has no age or date ... I understand your feelings, Warren ... rest in peace Michael - hugs // Anne-Lise Warren Doll October 21, 2019 at 9:42 PM Thanks so much, Anne-Lise.

Line Gauthier October 14, 2019 at 8:09 PM Very touching, Warren. Warren Doll October 21, 2019 at 1:18 PM Thank You

Vijay Pandit October 14, 2019 at 2:25 PM My thoughts and prayers are with you, Warren..this heartfelt tribute speaks from your heart so lovingly! Warren Doll October 21, 2019 at 1:17 PM Thank You.