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Feeling Numb and Out of Place

I never thought I would have to say that my youngest brother passed away
A freak accident took his life
Always thought that I would die first.
Feeling numb and out of place
Can’t see anything but his face
Constantly missing and mourning him 
Hoping to see him again someday

Rest in Peace- Michael

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Lady Labyrinth

Date: 8/3/2021 7:56:00 PM

It is very sad when someone whom we love, so very close to us (or even estranged but still very much loved), moves on. I don't believe they ever truly leave us though Warren, they are always close by watching over us, or walking with us. Lots of love to you and those who loved your brother. xx

Warren Doll
Date: 8/5/2021 5:45:00 AM

Lady, thanks so much~ Warren

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/6/2020 4:42:00 PM

So sorry to hear :(

Warren Doll
Date: 5/8/2020 3:20:00 PM

Thanks so much ,Kim. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Gail Debole

Date: 2/10/2020 5:24:00 PM

Warren, You have my sympathies. Very nice heartfelt tribute.

Warren Doll
Date: 2/11/2020 1:24:00 PM

Gail, Thank you so much for your comments and visit. Al the best~ Warren

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/13/2020 10:23:00 AM

Reading again, your poem tugs the heart, Warren--you are right, no one should have to face this.

Warren Doll
Date: 1/14/2020 1:28:00 PM

Vijay, thanks for visiting again. Best Wishes~ Warren

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/11/2020 10:52:00 PM

I’m so sorry that you lost your brother. We always think we have so much time. I Think through the shock of it it’s more difficult to lose someone instantly. No time to say goodbye. Your lovely poem is very moving. Blessings for a happier new year. xxoo

Warren Doll
Date: 1/13/2020 10:04:00 AM

Connie, thank you so much for your very kind comments. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Jan Allison

Date: 12/25/2019 5:35:00 PM

such a sad situation my thoughts are with you and your family Warren, I know this time of year can be very difficult for many. hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll
Date: 12/27/2019 8:49:00 AM

Hi Jan, trying to get back to writing poems again but it's been very difficult. Still in shock about my brother dying. Thanks for visit. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/25/2019 11:19:00 AM

I deeply believe that such partings, though horrific, are temporary...and someday cherished ones will again be united in a loving, pain-free place. Blessings and prayers, my friend.

Warren Doll
Date: 12/27/2019 8:42:00 AM

Thanks Joe. I look forward to seeing him again. Happy New Year~ Warren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2019 8:03:00 PM

so sorry this happened. It was recent? God bless you and your family in your grief.

Warren Doll
Date: 11/13/2019 11:08:00 AM

Thanks so much. Andrea.

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/9/2019 8:16:00 AM

Warren, This is such a beautiful expression of love through the tears! Sometimes, words are all we have to give, A lovely tribute!

Warren Doll
Date: 11/10/2019 10:42:00 AM

You are so right. Thanks so much ,Mike. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/22/2019 1:30:00 PM

You mentioned his passing in your reply to my last comment - losing a close relative is very traumatic - you have my heartfelt condolences Warren - blessings, Jennifer.

Warren Doll
Date: 10/24/2019 9:28:00 AM

Thank you, Jennifer