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Feeling

there is a warmer feeling
To end a happy day
a heightened edge of satisfaction
Whetted honed to slice to peeling
dulled down senses self defences 
like a pair of scratchy lenses
helping insights to unfold
and enfold the mess and clutter
That we mutter as we utter
To better this our day of action 
gaining traction. As reaction 
to feeling kindly certain 
It is good to end this way
Sets in

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 5/3/2014 6:31:00 AM
A thought provoking piece. Well penned.
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Date: 4/28/2014 6:13:00 AM
Awesome write, Congrats on your poem being featured this week, Donald
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