'feel What I Feel'

The night stretches out in front of me Thoughts floating between loneliness and contentment Sometimes I like being in my own space Other times I yearn for the comfort of being with you Like tonight The noise of the hands of time Moving swiftly So loud that it chased my sleep away Wish I could talk to you Make you feel the love I feel Whenever you hold me Make you feel the love I feel Whenever you talk to me to make you understand to make you feel That underneath all my mulishness the stratum of independence is a heart that beats Only for you ©154530092013

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Date: 9/27/2020 11:49:00 PM
wow ... this feeling is from the core of real heart ......pleasure to read this poem
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Date: 10/12/2013 6:31:00 PM
I could definitely feel your emotions coming through this poem. I can relate to these feelings that you expressed so well here. Excellent poem, Wilma! I loved it! Was this written for the contest? If so, I wish you the best of luck!...Thank you very much for your great comments! I really appreciate it!
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Date: 10/6/2013 9:33:00 AM
Very nice poem
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Date: 10/1/2013 3:35:00 PM
This write shines with your romance and a loving soul, one of desire to be with your love! I just loved reading between your lines and feeling what it means to you to be with this special person! Great Work!!
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Date: 10/1/2013 12:51:00 AM
thanks for the note, Wilma. Things are hectic on my end too and I really should be getting to bed but I just want to read poems of the people that commented to me today. how I wish I had more hours in a day!!
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Date: 9/30/2013 2:02:00 PM
- As always a pleasure to read your beautiful poem dear Wilma - Continue with beautiful thoughts, bless you! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/30/2013 8:46:00 AM
Wonderful and dreamy. Lovely
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Date: 9/30/2013 8:33:00 AM
Damn. Those last 3 lines...spectacularly striking. Excellent job!
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Date: 9/30/2013 8:30:00 AM
Beautifully written Wilma. I identify--- always striving for independence and wanting more of my 'own space', but ultimately we do need a soul mate.
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