Feel the Love

let your love loose … as the sun warms your beating heart ~ land of enchantment

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Hilo Poet

Date: 6/5/2019 7:01:00 PM

Ah! I needed to read Caren's whereto, she nailed it--New Mexico's State Motto, thanks for the refresher GW, Aloha William

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/5/2019 7:26:00 PM

And thank YOU for the important feedback, William. Appreciated. ~ gw

CayCay Jennings

Date: 6/5/2019 11:03:00 AM

I love being on that enchanting land - thank you for stirring up the feel of it with your pen, now please just leave me here! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/5/2019 1:15:00 PM

Please stay in that enchanting land just as long as you'd like, CayCay! :) gw

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/5/2019 7:48:00 AM

Excellent advice. Spring is in the air so should love.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/5/2019 9:06:00 AM

The two -- Spring and Love -- often go hand in hand, as you've noted. It's the season when Love 'springs to life.' :) gw

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/5/2019 6:14:00 AM

I love this which I sometimes see on bumpers of cars from New Mexico. "Land of Enchantment". Adore this and glad you wrote it for a beating heart. Sweet.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/5/2019 9:05:00 AM

Especially glad that you liked this haiku, written (yes) for a beating heart... And I never realized that New Mexico was the 'Land of Enchantment!' Thanks for that. :) gw