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Feel My Pain

I can't wipe past betrayals away; those transgressions are here to stay. And while love holds no guarantee; at the very least, trust in me. Failing to reconcile old fears, questioning love brings only tears. And building emotional walls, you ignore the truth when it calls. Your fears choreograph each move as if I've something to prove. And as doubt denigrates your mood, you act insane, getting unglued. You think you're being ill-treated; cursing your fate, you feel cheated. And sounding completely deranged, insults get angrily exchanged. Armed with lies and a bruised ego; you recoil, the wounded hero. You don't give love, only receive; and, in truth, constantly deceive. When will you ever trust again, put yours aside, and feel my pain? Sullying my dreams with regret, you're losing my love and respect.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/13/2018 12:33:00 PM
Such drama... some people can barely cope with life and just aren't ready for love. On the other hand everyone deserves love. What to do!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/13/2018 1:08:00 PM
Thanks Line, your friendship and support are much appreciated. Emile.
Date: 7/1/2016 1:12:00 PM
A lovers brawl is always complicated your poem seems to say, and I must agree. Love, daver
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/1/2016 1:14:00 PM
Thanks Daver, I appreciate your support. Emile
Date: 6/29/2016 9:22:00 AM
What an emotional write, describes very well a manipulative partner playing the victim while ignoring all the pain their words cause. Terrible ordeal for the recipient of vitriolic words, all orchestrated, what a symphony of pain. Well done!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/29/2016 11:31:00 AM
Thanks John, your friendship and support are much appreciated. Emile.
Date: 6/28/2016 4:19:00 PM
Oh my...what a deep write, Emile. It's easy to become self centered and play part of the victim, but if that excludes the pain of another, one must try to rise above and show empathy.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/29/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, I truly appreciate your support. Emile.

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