Feel Me

Darkness.

I am standing in the spotlight.

Somebody opens the door.

Subtle perfumes slowly fill my nostrils,
their owner must be somewhere at the end of the room.

My sight sharpens and I see her shape, her perfect shape.
She moves to the table.
The waiter chases her with a drink like a dog,
watching her every move.
Who could blame him ?

I imagine she is beautiful.
Soft skin, long, fair hair
and deep blue eyes full of mystery I want to solve.

My mouth opens as she takes the first sip.
I press my lips against the microphone
as if I was about to kiss her.

I lower my voice and stuck my sight
in that black, goddess- shaped shadow.
I hope our eyes meet, I hope she shivers.
In my mind my voice caresses every inch of her body.

I close my eyes and whisper passionately.
Hold the microphone stand the same way I would hold her waist.
I pull it close to my chest.
My words are getting louder, faster.
Heart beats like crazy and blood burns my veins.

I stop.

Her perfumes fill my nostrils again.
For a moment there I think she is right in front of me.
I can almost feel her warmth.

Bright light makes me lift my eyelids.

She is gone...

I walk up to her table.
There is only a glass
with a red, bitter- sweet mark on it.

I already miss her taste, the taste I have never known.


(First part of that story/ poem is here http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=596030)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/20/2017 4:28:00 PM
A very beautiful written poem, you ve explained the scene and your feelings beautifully and that s what poetry is about, a very nice poem, can i know that in this poem are you telling the story from a man s point of view or it was also a girl, anyway I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 4/1/2016 4:06:00 PM
You spin a sweet yarn no doubt. Like this piece
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Date: 7/13/2015 12:15:00 AM
Danka, thank you for the support... SKAT
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Date: 10/13/2014 12:57:00 PM
Hi Danka, I was all smiles when reading your poem. Very charming indeed. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 10/9/2014 11:46:00 AM
This is so seductive...I am off to look at part 1 :)....hugs Tim
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