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Feel Light

Float like a fly Glide the air Reach the sky But feel light Soar high Think big worries waive And feel light Wander around Whirl the world Grasp the crown Still feel light Trounce trouble Put it down Jump above And feel light Trace your light Follow the trail Shine bright But feel light Feel the light within you, ignite it And fly high But feel light Worries waive Jump above Fly high Reach sky Grasp crown Shine bright But feel light

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Date: 7/9/2021 3:23:00 PM
wow, this is so cool. Like your own invented poetry form as well! I was thinking light as in "weight" and by the end, I could see that light meant more like the light of truth or happiness!!
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Date: 7/8/2021 12:45:00 PM
Uplifting poem that makes one feel like flying, dearest, Supraja. Much enjoyed. Hugs xxx
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Date: 7/8/2021 11:25:00 AM
A superb poem with a tremendous insightful message, great advice too, I enjoyed reading it, and I wish you great luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/8/2021 5:58:00 AM
Wish I could feel light. Too overweight. But joking apart your poem is delightful and imparts a great lesson. Hugs.
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Date: 7/8/2021 5:23:00 AM
Great message in every stanza. Loved the line feel light. Very inspiring.
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Date: 7/8/2021 4:58:00 AM
Great upbeat message in every stanza. Well done, Supraja.
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