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Feel me an emotion deep inside your heart,a soft crimson rose reicarnated, a red heart full of velvet petals ,birthed from a white wild simple daisy embroided in mystique passion,a bacchus of wine in finest aroma of verses, and deepest thoughts of you.Feel me ,as I come back to you,in your night,a gentle sweet wind through your open window, caressing your face,breezing you in a sweet dream,breathin you in,lullabying you on a ride just for two,me and you,in a beautiful forest by the lake,lying down on a carpet of golden leaves.Feel me there,once again,Feel me so very close to you.taste me,taste my juicy strawberry lips as we kiss,a wet kiss.Feel me in the fresh liquid raidrops cleansing your mind,from every worry,from every trouble, as i pat your back,and listen to you,to your wants,to your needs,and to your every thought.Let me listen to your silent voice,echoing inside my own existence!Let me feel you,your wishes,your dreams,your past,your present,Let me listen to who you are and what you are,what you want,let me be here,feel me,cos I am here for you.Feel that little soft spot in my heart,that soft spot full of love and warmth ,reserved just for you.Feel me as we dream,as we hug,as we snog,under yesterday's lanterne,in the park,holding hands ,once again. Feel me as we walk and talk,smile and giggle all the way,Feel me as we lie on the rocks,gazing in each other's eyes,cheered by tamed silver waves,covered by a warm balnket of shining stars,Hugging the golden Moon,in blue black velvet skies.Feel me as i dip my brush in oils,painting this path,a garden of Eden,created just for you.A path of coloured rainbows where we can walk.where we can dream,where we can live and love,where we will never lose each other again.A path where emotions and feelings aren't hid.a path, where i will always feel loved by you,and you will always feel loved by me.Feel me a candle flame born just for you.I don't wanna go away again,I want to stay here with you.I don't want you to go away,I want you to stay here,with me.I want you to love me ,as you did in the past,I want to feel your passion,your love once again,I want to feel your hearbeat,that heart, i loved so much.I want, need to know you love me still. Feel my love,cos i always loved you ,and I always will.Feel me as your hand cups my breast.Let your palm feel the drumming of my heart,Feel me, cos I'm still so much in love with you. New Version : Feel Me ... Feel me, an emotion deep inside your heart A blushed rose reincarnated from withered petals Birthed in fervent passion and affectionate thoughts of you. Feel my colours of red- wine within the jet-black of your night Let me rest upon your pillow breathing in your lullaby. Feel me on blanket of blown leaves and a dew-lush zephyr breeze Taste me,taste my waters from fresh rain,let me wash away your pain. Let me cleanse your mind and soul from saxaphonic blues. Let my fingers run way down all over your back as I listen to desires ,wants and jazzy tunes. Let me hold on to your hand,while we walk,giggle and talk. Let us sit on our on the old bench where our hearts were scarred by stems. Feel me fall where footprints rest.Pick me up,feel my caress. Watch me paint a rainbow path with palettes of hundred hues Let your secret garden blossom where my velvet bleeds its blooms. Feel me, Feel me by your side. Let me capture sun and moon within the fire of your eyes. Feel me, can you hear my plea ? My beloved you...Come close ...Come get lost in me.
Least Viewed - Contest sponsored by Marugo Mo Rewritten : 19th October 2016

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Date: 12/7/2016 1:53:00 AM
Lovely...... Congrats on being featured....
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Date: 4/6/2010 11:32:00 AM
Wonderful portrait, a loving feast for my hungry eyes.... Good work my friend......:JP]
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Date: 3/30/2010 9:36:00 AM
A rose by any other species is human
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Date: 3/28/2010 12:20:00 PM
Beautiful write, Charma...hope you're doing well....now go post this on PP!! ....Audrey
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Date: 3/28/2010 9:06:00 AM
wow very nice write faleshia
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Date: 3/28/2010 8:47:00 AM
Charmaine, i truly hope you awaken one morning and your desires become reality >> James
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Date: 3/28/2010 8:38:00 AM
Wow, Charma! Lovely written! Exceptional! Always enjoy reading your poetry! April weather already arrived here with rain and sun - ready for Easter! I do wish you happy Easter holidays in Malta!!! And thank you for all your friendly comments....Gert
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Date: 3/28/2010 7:55:00 AM
OH MY ... u must post this one on PP and let all everyone see the intense passion of your writes... please... this is a new fav as it fits my sentiments to the max..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 3/28/2010 3:25:00 AM
Hmmmm !!!! so full of passion Charma warms the heart great piece lady Daniel
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