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Feeding Over Water

piercing swallow's wings
                     
                         earth by heaven's mirror streaked

                                 ripples between worlds









18.03.06

birdwaterfree verse

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Robert Warlov

April 5, 2018 at 7:45 PM

mysterious actions placed, then "ripples" resolves into two planes in motion. I got dizzy. Pulitzer stuff. - fav

Robert Warlov

April 15, 2018 at 12:13 AM

Hyperbolic, I know. Sorry, but I love the form so much; have read so many. It's that powerful- that fine.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 6, 2018 at 7:25 AM

That's a big word Robert! A humble thank you <3 xomo!

Robert Marlow

March 27, 2018 at 2:51 PM

Beautiful imagery and phrasing. Nicely done.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 27, 2018 at 9:08 PM

Thank you Robert :)

Lisa Ricci

March 26, 2018 at 10:35 AM

Hello Maureen. I have so much respect for all of you that write in this format that is so unique. You have stayed true to the form voice and tone. All is well within the entry including the imagery. May this day find you well.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 26, 2018 at 12:31 PM

Hello Lisa! Thank you so much for your kind encouraging words. Blessings and a wonderful day to you. I hope you are well. xomo :)

Gregory Richard Barden

March 24, 2018 at 6:42 PM

Exquisite phrasing and imagery ... for me personally, Haiku should tell a story, and yours always do. This is wonderfully rich with substance! Fav-ing. <3

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 25, 2018 at 8:25 AM

Thank you Greg :) I'm not sure Haiku and me got it going on, I think I'm Free Versing in seventeen syllables ;) I'm no less happy with this piece <3

Gershon Wolf

March 22, 2018 at 9:44 PM

Powerfully penned, my friend: Poetically-packed contents. Harrowingly hallowed Haiku. :) Gershon

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 23, 2018 at 10:02 AM

Thank you my comrade in poetry :) xomo!

Pat Adams

March 17, 2018 at 10:25 AM

Very well written. Very descriptive as well, (As it should be!).......80)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 17, 2018 at 11:25 AM

Thank you Sweets! :)) xomo!

Akkina Downing

March 17, 2018 at 9:08 AM

Outstanding haiku, Mo! Best wishes in the contest... hugs :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 17, 2018 at 10:03 AM

Thank you! That does mean so much. I didn't actually place in this contest, but I'm no less happy with this piece. More of a free verse in Haiku format me thinks ;) thank you again lovely! xomo :)

Robert Lindley

March 11, 2018 at 2:32 PM

Love the image of Nature you have created with this superb Haiku, my friend. As ever, your talents shine bright, regardless of poetry form written in. A fav.....

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 16, 2018 at 9:48 AM

Thank you my friend <3 xomo!

James Swartz

March 11, 2018 at 7:22 AM

Great stuff Maureen! An inspirational view it places in my mind.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 16, 2018 at 9:47 AM

Thank you James :) xomo!

Janice Canerdy

March 8, 2018 at 3:21 PM

Paints an awe-inspiring scene, Maureen! Janice

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 16, 2018 at 9:46 AM

Thank you! Awe inspired is precisely true, swallows always do awe me :) xomo!

Paul Callus

March 8, 2018 at 9:12 AM

Lovely and very much inspired, Maureen. I hope to see this one on the winners' list. Regards // paul

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 8, 2018 at 1:09 PM

Thank you Paul! Much appreciated :) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

March 7, 2018 at 3:16 PM

wow, an outstanding visual yours delivers. I think it's an impressive one for the contest

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 7, 2018 at 3:59 PM

Thank you! I switched it around, mo haiku'y than mo'y lol (y) ;)

Eric Boddie

March 7, 2018 at 7:50 AM

no vessel of Life....can survive without nature's wife....Birthing Sacrifice....wow maureen....so very inspiring....;)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 7, 2018 at 3:57 PM

Thank you Eric! :) xomo

Joseph May

March 7, 2018 at 7:48 AM

Beautiful haiku Maureen...best wishes..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 7, 2018 at 3:56 PM

Thank you Joseph :) xomo

Arturo Michael

March 6, 2018 at 7:47 PM

Hope he got the fish...Nice imagery...Lovely Haiku...All the best Maureen

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 6, 2018 at 8:20 PM

Thank you! They're insectivores :) watching them hawk insects one of my all time favourite things to do. All too rare an encounter these days but hope blooms with spring <3 all the best Arturo xomo