Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Feeding Frenzy

My favorite milkshake, served chilled
  I reach across the table and - it all spilled
                 Mum's not exactly
                        thrilled

     Well, at least the pizza's steaming hot
 I bite right into the center, a tad overwrought
    Water! Water!... I never knew pizza was
                        fraught

           Ah! Dessert is chocolate cake
      I eat way too much - get a bellyache
            My poor stomach's dancing
                   The Shamrock 
                         Shake




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 ~ Inspired by Jan Allison's 'Mother's Day' entry in 
    Mohan Chutani's 'Minichu' contest, although my 
    poem is neither a Minichu nor a contest-entry.

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Bill Baker March 24, 2022 at 8:48 AM But a fun read, Gershon. Bill

Bj Legros Kelley March 20, 2022 at 1:41 AM Oh poor Gershon, lol, you have made my belly ache from laughing! You actually reminded me of one of my grandsons, and I cannot stop laughing!!! Gee, I hope your next meal goes a bit better :) ~BJ Gershon Wolf March 20, 2022 at 4:31 PM Well, you've just made my day, BJ. If I remind you of one of your grandsons, that 'Fountain of Youth' vitamin drink I've been trying must be working major miracles! Smiles, gw

Valsa George March 20, 2022 at 12:22 AM Very interesting write, in beautiful format, Gershon! Biting right into the center of a steaming Pizza can be so very dangerous ..... it will burn the mouth that you will have to starve for days together....! :) Gershon Wolf March 20, 2022 at 4:30 PM Thank you, Valsa. I'm too old for pizza anyway. Can't digest all that cheese anymore. ~ Stomata non grata