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Federigo's Falcon

That look of fierce disdain, nobility! That regal plume of chestnut ruddy-brown with speckled breast! No hint of weak servility besmirched the falcon's fine, imperious frown. He loved the way it sat in proud tranquility above his desk. He gazed down on the town which spread below his window with an air of brittle hope (or thinly-veiled despair). Ser Federigo was of noble stock. His patrimony took in twenty farms, with crops of chestnuts, olives, pullets, cocks, but penury now ruffed the millpond's calm. The poplar copse and barn were now in hock, low pastures sold. The nephews were alarmed! So, piecemeal, parcels, paddocks mortgaged off provided funds for gifts. We mustn't scoff to learn that Federigo was in love, and sadly, wholly, profitlessly so. Fair Monna was the delicate white dove to Federigo's clumsy clawless crow. You've met her kind. Serene, aloof, "above", while Federigo worshiped from below. She took the necklaces, which she construed (as Beauty will) as nothing but her due. Estates and tithes were frittering away, but little Federigo cared. His two delights were Monna, and the falcon. Come what may, he fantasized on lonely, frugal nights of riding into Fiesole one day, attended by a dozen sybarites, (and though she's someone's wife, and someone's mother) the bird on one arm, Monna on the other. And now to Monna. When her child fell sick, she watched in anguish as the boy declined. The fever burned. He hung between the quick and the departed, in his crisis pined for one thing only - could this be the trick to save him? What was on his raving mind was Federigo's falcon. All's not lost. She'd get the bird, no matter what the cost. Imagine Federigo's sudden joy to see her, dressed divinely, walking up from Fiesole! The few he still employed were summoned. "We must drink from pewter cups, no stint of treasure!" Pleasure unalloyed was in his grasp. "She's sure to stay and sup! So plunder pantry, bring forth soup and fish! Damn! Is there nothing for a special dish?" For once, she was approachable, it seemed. They talked and drank, and flirted with their eyes. This was better than he could have dreamed! Her thin silk dress defined her shapely thighs. The moment came. The pewter platter gleamed as it was carried in. "Here's a surprise!" The lid was lifted off, at his behest. There, trussed and roasted, lay the falcon's breast.

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Date: 9/30/2022 6:31:00 AM
Amazing story and so well put to verse. I think I have read about this in some version all that a man will sacrifice to love. Best, SuZ
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Michael Coy
Date: 10/1/2022 12:20:00 PM
Thank you so much! And brilliantly recognised - the original is taken from Boccaccio. I'm grateful. Michael
Date: 3/11/2017 11:15:00 PM
Hi Michael, Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 2/24/2017 5:51:00 AM
I often make a variation of the form, sort of sestina rima lol. That aside, I am really very grateful that you showed up on Soup, because you let me do research, which I love. I had never heard of Longfellows's poem before, and now I do. And the rhyme is wonderful, I am awed, Sir!
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Darren White
Date: 3/12/2017 9:03:00 AM
You placed with the poem! Congratulations :)
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Michael Coy
Date: 2/24/2017 7:55:00 AM
What a guy you are. The original story can be found in the "Decameron", a fascinating assembly of stories dating back to Italy in the 13th century. Longfellow, genius that he was, mined the Decameron for gems like this. Darren, keep researching. You're great!

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