Fed Up

I'm tired of the preening the posturing the posing I'm fed up with the pretending the petulance the pessimism Time for a new mirror ~ or perhaps a new me

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Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 6/22/2021 4:06:00 PM

I hear you there Gershon. Nice one! :-)

W.A. Cholt

Date: 6/20/2021 2:01:00 PM

That tired fed up feeling hits us all like a brick wall from time to time. I guess we have to muddle through as best we can. Accentuate the positive or whatever it takes. You've nailed it with this short poem.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/20/2021 6:03:00 PM

Thanks W.A. Hope you are well. Cheers, gw

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/20/2021 1:37:00 AM

Total body transplant will sort you out. Tom

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/20/2021 5:59:00 PM

Total? Total body transplant, Tom? I was hoping to get a 10-minute oil change at 'Jiffy Lube.' lol. ~ The Tin Man

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/20/2021 12:02:00 AM

time always comes with new vision and that is you O poet~

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/20/2021 5:53:00 PM

If I'm the vision, let the viewer close his/her eyes. Lol. Thanks, Mahtab! :) gw

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/19/2021 9:26:00 PM

Wow, Gershon, I'd say it depends on who is doing the six p's....I can't think it would be you, frankly, because you're just not that sort of person.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/19/2021 9:30:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Sure looks like I've pulled the wool over someone's eyes here, Milt; but I appreciate your faith in my (less-than-sterling) character. Beware the Wolf in sheep's clothing. ~ Wolfman