Fed Up

I'm tired of 
  the preening
  the posturing
  the posing

I'm fed up with
  the pretending
  the petulance
  the pessimism

Time for a new mirror
  ~ or perhaps a new me

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Anne E Sangster - K

June 22, 2021 at 4:06 PM

I hear you there Gershon. Nice one! :-)

W.A. Cholt

June 20, 2021 at 2:01 PM

That tired fed up feeling hits us all like a brick wall from time to time. I guess we have to muddle through as best we can. Accentuate the positive or whatever it takes. You've nailed it with this short poem.

Gershon Wolf

June 20, 2021 at 6:03 PM

Thanks W.A. Hope you are well. Cheers, gw

Tom Cunningham

June 20, 2021 at 1:37 AM

Total body transplant will sort you out. Tom

Gershon Wolf

June 20, 2021 at 5:59 PM

Total? Total body transplant, Tom? I was hoping to get a 10-minute oil change at 'Jiffy Lube.' lol. ~ The Tin Man

Mahtab Bangalee

June 20, 2021 at 12:02 AM

time always comes with new vision and that is you O poet~

Gershon Wolf

June 20, 2021 at 5:53 PM

If I'm the vision, let the viewer close his/her eyes. Lol. Thanks, Mahtab! :) gw

L Milton Hankins

June 19, 2021 at 9:26 PM

Wow, Gershon, I'd say it depends on who is doing the six p's....I can't think it would be you, frankly, because you're just not that sort of person.

Gershon Wolf

June 19, 2021 at 9:30 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Sure looks like I've pulled the wool over someone's eyes here, Milt; but I appreciate your faith in my (less-than-sterling) character. Beware the Wolf in sheep's clothing. ~ Wolfman

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