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February Star

Prior to March Sunlight streams brilliant Streaked silver veils. Periwinkles bloom in amber dew; Glossy azure blossoms Rusty vermilion. 2/20/2017

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/27/2018 8:39:00 PM

Phillip,you paint a beautiful picture with your words in this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/24/2017 5:38:00 AM

"Rusty vermilion" sounds like a beautiful colour, Phillip:) great write:)

Darren White

Date: 2/22/2017 12:48:00 AM

Those colours, so brilliant, beautiful alliteration. Great imagery. Love it :)

Chris Green

Date: 2/21/2017 11:40:00 AM

This was beautiful, perhaps February is the theme but this sounds like the perfect spring day to me.

Phillip Garcia
Date: 2/21/2017 11:59:00 AM

Thank you, Chris. It was a surreal experience full of beauty and mystery to see. It's like 80 degrees here right now and feels like spring

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/20/2017 7:40:00 PM

Hi Phillip, this piece is so beautiful, full of awesome colors and imagery with a smooth flow that I love! A-7! Best regards. Pandita

Phillip Garcia
Date: 2/20/2017 8:17:00 PM

Thank you, Pandita, for your lovely and encouraging comment. Much appreciated

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/20/2017 6:17:00 PM

Lots of beauty in this one, Phillip. Do the periwinkles bloom already where you are? It has been a strange winter here, so I would not be surprised.

Phillip Garcia
Date: 2/20/2017 7:01:00 PM

Thank you, Agnes! I believe the periwinkles have a bit longer to wait here in Houston but I could be wrong. I wrote this this morning when i went outside and the sky was like orangeish red instead of blue. It was cool but kinda spooky too

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/20/2017 5:26:00 PM

Lovely write, Phillip. Full of beautiful images:)

Phillip Garcia
Date: 2/20/2017 7:02:00 PM

Word up and big thanks DT

Lisa Ricci

Date: 2/20/2017 4:53:00 PM

This is wonderful poetry.

Phillip Garcia
Date: 2/20/2017 7:03:00 PM

Thank you Lisa! I appreciate your feedback, very nice of you