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Febrile Night

I awoke in the febrile night again, half dazed from my conviction of your certainty, contorted by the pounding of 4 am, and still restless with vestigial sleep. My sense for rain laps the water of vestibular illusion and I am again in the Venetian dusk of your warmth. Somewhere, between July and this dense archipelago I hear the whisper of November, it is the chilled first day, shared with menses and candle shadow. It is all seasons and every brush stroke of memory, it is the in-escapable, visual artefact, of you.

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Date: 8/19/2010 6:17:00 AM
Welcome to soup hope that your stay will be long and productive with many more writes to amaze us..Hope that you enjoy reading all the gifted poets and poetess that post on poetrysoup..Sara
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Date: 8/18/2010 12:59:00 PM
Once agin your poetry takes my breath awaw.Love,Jamecia
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Date: 8/18/2010 10:20:00 AM
What a wonderful day to be reading poetry of others. I am so happy your poetry is among those I am reading this morning Michael. I wish you as I wish all my fellow poets the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. It is a pleasure to me to read my fellow poets poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/18/2010 8:16:00 AM
great write....TAH
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