Feathered Dreams

"feathered dreams" you appear as only you can breezing in softly as a feather whispering sounds of a bird and with angelic love shown through each night before closing my eyes I wish hard waiting to see you asking still to hear your voice just as a cardinal there you are lasting footprints clearly remain as your essence forever shadows me guiding me from what was to what is and the reality of how we were one on any given night I continue my plea for another video of sight and sound hoping you'll visit or return to me holding hands in feathered dreams SkyWatcher 10-24-23
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Lawrence Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 12:23 PM
Wow dear Lisa …. Just beautiful through and through . I followed your words and heart and soul through this magical poem . My favorite passage - lasting footprints remain as your essence forever shadows me … Thank you for this gift of words and emotions. Hugs, Susan :)
Ricci Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 5:21 AM
Good Morning Susan. Hi. It is I who thanks you. Truly. Thank you. I do not take reviews visits or commentary for granted. I very much appreciate your generosity and intake on the entry. May all those missing a loved one have feathered dreams. Have a wonderful day. Blessings (smile)
Empress Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 4:14 AM
This poem is flows in such captivating and eloquent cadence, and its not just beautifully crafted but its so very soul stirring and touching the way you’ve expressed longing and love to relive again, moments shared, maybe through feathered dreams too! How clever is this! I really love especially “ holding hands in feathered dreams” wow! Your way of writing and weaving emotions is impeccable! Absolutely loved reading you! They are so poetic and easy to comprehend and touching. Pleasure visiting u
Ricci Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 2:39 AM
Oh My Goodness. Hello Ink Empress. Good Morning. I am speechless and beyond honored for this most generous review. Truly. Words do not express my appreciation. It is my hope that I and my entry deserve your generosity. The credit belongs to loved ones who are grieving and hoping and wishing for feathered dreams... Thank you again. Have a wonderful morning and day. I look forward to seeing more of your work as well. Blessings (smile)
Baker Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 4:35 PM
"Holding hands in feathered dreams", a beautiful thought, put so poetically to close your poem, Lisa. Memories and the desire to experience love of the past once more are heartfelt longings. Thank you for readings and commenting on so many of my poems this month. You light up my life. :-) Peace and love to you, from Sara and me
Ricci Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 2:31 AM
Good Morning Bill. Hi. It is I who thanks you and yes Sara too for turning reading and seeing my entries. I am honored each time when you do and when you leave a comment. Words do not express my appreciation. Your intake here enhances the entry itself. Truly. Its so sad when a loved one has passed and emotions are left inside and one can only keep hoping and wishing for feathered dreams. Thank you for everything Bill. I will leave you this morning with Love Peace and Blessings to you as well. I will see you and Sara soon on your pages. PS - Have a safe halloween night. (smile)
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