Feather - Talk

I'm 
a
feather
so fragile 
floating freely down 
through those faraway fir trees. Then,
my soft frame crashes to the ground, crushing all my dreams.
You pick the forsaken me. Your dreams flow through me - your favoured quill. I've found my purpose.



01~28~17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Nusker Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 10:48 PM
I love this fibonacci, Jo. Simply wonderful!
La France Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 3:35 PM
Jo, this is such a dreamy lovely poem, beautifully penned, soup mail in a moment ~
Rodrigues Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 7:28 PM
Love the Video that accompanies your poem!
Manassian Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 8:54 AM
How delightful! I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. Sometimes finding purpose comes through a difficult process. Blessings
Smith Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 8:31 AM
A purpose for all things, lovely write Jo...
Wolf Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 4:32 AM
So eloquently put! Lovely, Jo!
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