Feather

bluejay feather waits hiker quietly notices stuck it in his cap written September 7, 2021

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/13/2021 1:57:00 AM

Just the place for a fine feather...Delice

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/12/2021 12:40:00 PM

Ahhhhh delicacy makes the best poem.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/12/2021 10:43:00 AM

This is marvelous, Milton! It's in my faves.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/12/2021 12:13:00 PM

Thank you so much, Evelyn. I appreciate your read and your comment. How nice of you to FAVE it. It makes me so happy!

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/12/2021 7:21:00 AM

This Haiku was written with a lot of levity. Your metaphor is just breathtaking.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/12/2021 9:22:00 AM

Thanks so much, Lasaad.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/12/2021 2:12:00 AM

Love the image Milton but now you've got me humming Yankee doodle lol. Enjoy your Sunday. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/12/2021 9:24:00 AM

Ah, Tom, it's a nice jaunty tune. Thanks so much for reading my poem and making a neat comment.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/11/2021 8:17:00 PM

I like the way you've given me, the reader, so much to think about, and so many options as well -- in so few words. Brilliant, Milt. A FAVE. Thanks, Gershon

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/11/2021 9:23:00 PM

Well, thanks so much, Gershon. I'm really pleased, and thank you for the FAVE. They come so rarely; I really appreciate it.

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 9/11/2021 7:45:00 PM

Very Jaunty...