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bluejay feather waits hiker quietly noticed stuck it in his cap
written September 7, 2021

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Date: 9/13/2021 1:57:00 AM
Just the place for a fine feather...Delice
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Date: 9/12/2021 12:40:00 PM
Ahhhhh delicacy makes the best poem.
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Date: 9/12/2021 10:43:00 AM
This is marvelous, Milton! It's in my faves.
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L MILTON HANKINS
Date: 9/12/2021 12:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Evelyn. I appreciate your read and your comment. How nice of you to FAVE it. It makes me so happy!
Date: 9/12/2021 7:21:00 AM
This Haiku was written with a lot of levity. Your metaphor is just breathtaking.
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L MILTON HANKINS
Date: 9/12/2021 9:22:00 AM
Thanks so much, Lasaad.
Date: 9/12/2021 2:12:00 AM
Love the image Milton but now you've got me humming Yankee doodle lol. Enjoy your Sunday. Tom
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L MILTON HANKINS
Date: 9/12/2021 9:24:00 AM
Ah, Tom, it's a nice jaunty tune. Thanks so much for reading my poem and making a neat comment.
Date: 9/11/2021 8:17:00 PM
I like the way you've given me, the reader, so much to think about, and so many options as well -- in so few words. Brilliant, Milt. A FAVE. Thanks, Gershon
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L MILTON HANKINS
Date: 9/11/2021 9:23:00 PM
Well, thanks so much, Gershon. I'm really pleased, and thank you for the FAVE. They come so rarely; I really appreciate it.
Date: 9/11/2021 7:45:00 PM
Very Jaunty...
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