Feast Your Eyes

They scoot up trees with the greatest of ease
  Then down again, like Swedes on skis

Exquisite balance changing gears
  They zoom around throughout the years

Wherever you live, city or rural
   Feast your eyes upon a whip-tailed squirrel



            April 30, 2020
        Couplet Poetry Contest
          Sponsor: Dear Heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Barden Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 11:26 PM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in Dear Heart's contest, Gershon - I hope you and yours are staying safe and sound. Blessings and keep up the great writing, My Friend! :o)
Wolf Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 3:02 PM
Thank you so much for noticing, Gregory. Best always, Gershon
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May 5, 2020 at 7:18 PM
Grshon, wonderful, and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
Wolf Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 8:29 PM
Thank you so much for sponsoring, Constance. Blessings, Gershon
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May 4, 2020 at 10:06 PM
Gershon, this winner is positivley "squirrely." Congratulations! We have just put up netting to protect our pears from the midday mirauders! Hope it works!
Wolf Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 8:28 PM
Yup. Squirrels are rodents, after all. Good luck! ~ gw
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May 4, 2020 at 9:57 PM
So glad to see your cute squirrels got a placement in the contest, Gershon, congratulations!
Wolf Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 8:27 PM
Thanks, Michelle. Squirrels are happy too!
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May 4, 2020 at 11:36 AM
Congratulations on your placement win in Dear Heart’s contest, Gershon. Hugs Eve
Wolf Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 4:15 PM
Thank you for noticing, Eve. :) gw
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May 4, 2020 at 6:42 AM
I watched two emptying my bird feeders while upside down on two twin trees yesterday. They are masterful.
Wolf Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 4:14 PM
They let you watch them while you were upside down?! Those cruel birds! (Just kidding). :) gw
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May 1, 2020 at 9:48 PM
Aw, so true, Gershon. We have quite a few resident squirrels in our yard that both annoy, (but mostly), entertain us with their antics. Great imagery that expresses the squirrels' lively nature with ease. Best wishes for a win, my dear friend.. ~Susan
Wolf Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 11:04 PM
Thanks for such a lovely, encouraging comment, my dear poetess! Cheers, Gershon
Somadas Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 12:36 AM
I was wondering what you are going to tell..The suspense was there till the end..Great entry in the contest..Good luck Gershon..
Wolf Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 12:35 PM
6 lines of suspense! whoa! Thank you, Jenish! ~ Gershon
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April 30, 2020 at 10:37 PM
'Swedes on skies' - something about that line is so YOU, Gershon :) And I love squirrels - we have a squirrel feeder in the front yard, along with most of our neighbors!
Wolf Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 12:32 PM
Squirrels are nowhere near as numerous in Chicago as they were 20 - 30 years ago, though I don't see anyone concerned about it. :) gw
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