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Fearing the Worse

escorted thru the fog to a secluded room down a long hall off away from other rooms every sign foreboding holding our breath for a verdict bad or worse hearts beating fearfully trying to calm our minds pretending for each other’s sake we’re not concerned we’re not alarmed we try to find comfort take a deep breath life goes on until it doesn’t AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on February 10, 2020

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Date: 2/20/2020 6:46:00 PM
having been through the cancer journey with my husband your words touched me deeply especially the ending Line, hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/20/2020 9:59:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/16/2020 9:49:00 AM
Nice write Line, very powerful like a dramatic movie scene.
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Date: 2/16/2020 10:29:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Juanita.
Date: 2/12/2020 11:53:00 AM
Powerful lines Line G! Haunting and well crafted.
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Date: 2/12/2020 1:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eric. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/11/2020 7:01:00 AM
Deeply affecting Line. I could feel the anxiety in this.
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Date: 2/11/2020 8:13:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Chris.
Date: 2/11/2020 4:52:00 AM
very touching reminds me when I went to get results after a cancer scare- what a relief- well done Line, regards Julie
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Date: 2/11/2020 8:14:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Julie. Congrats on your good news.

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